And whisper of riotous flames to an innocent heart
Your agony's sweetness
O darling sparrow
We lament
A wild cruel Greek god
Played his pranks in the mountains
Eating of the season's first and most tender
Fruits
With his animal cry
He split the sky's curtain in two
And from his flute two birds acsended
Piercing the heart with soft brutish demonic beauty
They sing to us
Of worlds unknown
His teeth in the sabra's defenceless delicate flesh
Let you bleed at his sight
As if you felt them
In your own
Between suq and madina
You force his fire upon you
Compelled by your ecstacy
The Greek god's dance
Draws your blood
Blood is a flame
That glares, glows, tempts and cries
And always smiles straight into danger's heart daringly
O darling, soul's sweetness!
Your eyes have already called him
He is coming to play
With their so daringly innocent looks
Green-eyed cats as if of right
Play their noisy games between suq
And madina
Not shunning any witness
You turned your face
But your heart
Flew away
Like a butterfly
My poor darling soul bird
Tell:
What is tormenting you so?
Beware of gifts and of Greek gods
For it does occur that even
The wisest among us
Pierced by a sun ray's passionate flower
Forget all about themelves and succumb
To another wisdom's oblivion
Where imperfection is perfection
And falls not short of redemption
Once the heart has learnt
To surrender
(This comes with a special greeting to Stephanie Hilpert.)
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Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
What beauty is woven within these words, dear friend, Mahdi and you always manage to convey that beauty so very well.
~ Mari
Reviewed by S H (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2005
Muhammad, how can I put it into words to express what I feel? Thank you. This is a gift more special than anyone has given me, and I don't even know you. I will cherish it always. You are very gifted and the poem is beautiful as your poems always are.
There are a lot of excellent lines i would like to comment on. But time is not permitting. Suffice to say that you have written here a powerfull and excellent poem. Its a delight and pleasure to read.
I'ts engaging and it radiates love and fervor. Look forward to reading more
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2005
As the child who is loved by his or her mother loves no other mother, so a woman who is loved by her husband loves no other man.
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I'ts engaging and it radiates love and fervor. Look forward to reading more
Cheers
Alain