You know it don’t you There is no escape, No island sunk deep enough Each shell carry’s the song along the ocean’s floor Immersed in serenade the senses return to the beginning The time of one The equinox of drifting souls
No matter how far arms are stretched, fingers still touch the forbidden, entering into shadow, bringing light of sensation
Chords fire in unison granting permission to what has been denounced or denied The horizon melts into hues of saturated daydreams
Swept by the undertow guided by unconscious want the taste lingers on
Presupposition may be argued saying I am on one side of a wall and that bricks have been put in place but to me the wall is made of sand and every now and then I let the shells play their song
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Reviews of "Whispers In The Wind "
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
"Whispers In The Wind" is spiritually uplifting! You have a brilliant mind, dear Ed, yet you share it in a way that it is not harmful for us to stare at the sun. Yes, let the shells play their song and let those who have ears listen!
"The horizon melts into hues of saturated daydreams " and "The equinox of drifting souls" fortify the ambiance of this most inspired write ... letting "the shells play their song" consolidates its essence ...
The picture you chose for your poem looks like two islands reaching out to each other, the poem also speaks to me of reaching, yearning, yet making the best of a situation at hand, the words here are lovely
pax A
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2007
A place where it never ends and always will be. Where souls meet and are shadowed let the shells play their song again Ed. A beautiful and meaningful poem... So much depth in this one for me to read thank you,
Peace,
Joselyn
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Love,
Eileen
"The equinox of drifting souls" This image gave me chills Edward. You are truly a unique gem in the mines of poetic expression. Well done!
Light and Wisdom ...
Love Tinka
A philosophic-poetic BLOW-bang in "Whispers In The Wind" storms up imagination and ontologic answers.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
pax A
Peace,
Joselyn