About how a mother can make you feel and just how special she is. This poem has been selected in the final catagory of the International Open Poetry Contest. Please wish me luck!!!
I hold myself back,
When I want to hug you
At moments so very odd,
Sneak up behind you,
Kiss you on the cheek
And then run off again,
I wonder at times,
What all I would just do
To see you smiling always,
And how your gentle ways,
And that twinkle in your eye
Just makes my day,
And how much I have depended,
On your loving open arms
To turn my sobs to giggles,
But you can never imagine,
How much I miss you
Each time you are away,
And that your every worried frown,
Makes me hold my breath
And my whole world sways,
And your every little worry,
Lets that choking silence
Surge into my life,
And I wonder if you know?
How deeply it hurts
Each time you are in dismay,
Your glance builds up my determination
But then your hurt is my endurance,
Beyond which I'll break,
I really wish that I could...
Help you in every way
At every corner of your life,
Do you realise how much
They make me worry?
Your lines of sacrifice,
Do you know that,
I can't do without you
Now or ever mom?
And do you know that
Your love is my weakness,
That keep me strong?
But I'm really sorry ma,
'Cause I just can't express
What I really want to say,
'Cause at every right time,
All the words go wrong
And till the right words that time has gone!
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Reviews of "MOM"
Reviewed by nashmia
Reviewed on August 29, 2002
im absolutely in love with this poem of urs..its out of this world...
A very good write. I wonder what you comment on reading my poem, "To Parents, with Love".
Reviewed by Meykaal~
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
I wudve given it 11 but its not in the scale!!!.....good work shezray,keep it up!!
Reviewed by JacK HikE
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
Shezray...this is just in time for Mothers day. I bet many readers will use it and mamy moms will cry happy tears on the 12th of May! Thanks Gorgeous!!!
Reviewed by Abbas Zaidi
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
Ideas present themselves quite fluently... nicely composed. I wonder how it'll feel to open up to my mom like this !!! 8-9 days before mother's day ur poem comes at JUST the right time for me to copy for amma ! :)
Sincerely WANT you to win ! ;)
Reviewed by Zain
Reviewed on May 4, 2002
really good...
Reviewed by Sadaf Rasool
Reviewed on May 3, 2002
Hey Sis... That was really sweet! I have no doubts about you getting the Big Award!!!!! Best of luck!
Reviewed by babar
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
well u did it again.I'm sure ur mom would be proud of u, as for the prize i wish u all the best.A delightfully delicious stuff.
Reviewed by Jassem Hashmi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
Each line accurately triggers off its expected emotional response. The poem sails across the imagination laden with literary associations ransacked from the riches of the Human Nature... :)
Reviewed by Sarah Rosenman (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
awwwwwww
Reviewed by Abid Kitchlew
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
A very beautiful attempt. Its nice to know that you feel what you have written otherwise you would not have been able to. Please do ask your mother to read this before it becomes late. I am sure that her appriciation would be the biggest prize for you. Best of Luck!
Reviewed by farrahnaz peerzada (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
beautiful.....almost made me cry :)
Reviewed by Ali
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
There is alot of depth in you. Though im a stranger, i can feel it. Excellent poem. Do you also write romantic stuff?
Reviewed by Saira Samee
Reviewed on April 29, 2002
that is a beautiful and soulful expression of a true human sentiment so often felt and so often left unspoken. Very special poem indeed. Saira
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2002
It was beautiful! U've put the feelings in the right words!!
Reviewed by Mustafa Chughtai (Reader)
Reviewed on January 3, 2002
......exactly the way i feel about my amma.....so very right yaar ! the mere presence of her makes me feel ...outa this world .....gr8 goin buddy '!!!
A very loving sentiment to a Mom that I bet knows how you feel. Maybe she's too shy to say so but she feels it in her heart. I felt the same way about my Mom and I know that my daughter (20 yrs) feels that way about me. Very good poem. Janet
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Sincerely WANT you to win ! ;)