woah, your piece took me to a lot of twists and turns of your mind. it made me also sing this morning, which was a lovely addition. thank you as always for your poetry, Sage.
You went well beyond the Oedipus complex for this romp through the raunchy. to think I loved eating that creamy white tasteless vitamin devoid cereal when I could've had the protein and vitamin rich real thing. But, being heterosexual, I never admired distaff like the altar sex can.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Ron