You don't know who you are reviewing. Terrorists that hide behind a poetry site and you call them friends and fellow poets. You have been phished and scammed here. The illusion will one day dawn on you that a few men on this site took advantage and helped themselves by using you to rake in the loot!
i love your use of metaphors. this is probably a cliche and you must have heard it too many times, your style and technique is uniquely you. i have not read anything quite like it.
Ron