This poem brought joy to my heart and made it dance! Very, very, very well done. Like the way you shared the historical reality of how the human race came to be, and showed how that is the basis of how we ought to treat one another. Have you considered creating a melody to go with it? It stands on its own, but would also make a most beautiful song!
Hope you share some more poems with us Linda.
Good one. Welcome to AD. I personally would never relegate women to be an afterthought "rib" of Adam, but that's just me. But I'm also not into tree-dwelling snakes. Your poem speaks of Genesis, and it moves well -- carrying the reader forward nicely. Well done. Please write more!
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I have all that I need.
He is my mentor and
I will go where He leads.
Hope you share some more poems with us Linda.
~a fellow human & poet, Zach
Ted
Grand debut sonnet, very well metered and rhymed. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)