Thanks for your critique; however, a poem (if at all a poem!) has a shelf life. In the words of Paul Valéry "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." And if both of you are correct then this little piece of text should be abandoned.
an interesting perspective in this one, Debs ... methinks "Margarita" should seek another degree of analysis ...
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2009
This mutely expressive commentary on the prevalence of abandonment is menacingly enhanced by virtue of its being cloaked in such a gender-specific dichotomy.
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Thanks for your critique; however, a poem (if at all a poem!) has a shelf life. In the words of Paul Valéry "A poem is never finished, only abandoned." And if both of you are correct then this little piece of text should be abandoned.