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It Was All A Dream
by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett → (All Poetry by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett)
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After all the kind words, long rides, cooking, cleaning, loving along with past hurts forgetting, I was only with eyes open dreaming.


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Cooking,

 cleaning,

 talking

,Loving,

yet I was dreaming.

Laughing, smiling, driving, hugging,

romancing, still just day dreaming.

Sexing, screaming, longing, humping,

the sweating, past hurts forgetting,

I was only dreaming.

Wanting, touching, grabbing, holding,

only for a moment, It was over,

I was dreaming.

Deep kissing, breath taken,

hearts pounding, fingers strolling,

Still yet dreaming.

From farewell to goodbye

from beginning to an ending,

I was only with eyes open

DREAMING.     
  


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 Reviews of "It Was All A Dream"
Reviewed by Rita Fagin
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
How fitting to read this dream poem at this time Aleja. I've just finished a dream poem, bringing it to reality at the end for the current book I'm working on. Thank you for your words of encouragement and truly, truly, best of success to you and yours. Take care, simply rita

Reviewed by Chris Rosenau
Reviewed on February 21, 2007
I like this write. You know some say every ending is another beginning. I found this to be true when my husband left and I thought that was the end of the world. My daughter was born the next month and suddenly I was living for another reason.
Great write, I'll be reading more.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2006
A beautifully written poem, strikes right through the heart. *hugs*

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2006
This one is expressed well... But for me the eyes open and dreaming can sometimes be a spiritual connection for one trying to stay alive in the moment....

Light & Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Shinya Yawakazi (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Wow this says alot and brings images in my head that i dont want to imagine but like poetry it just brings the image to your mind^^;But very good poem love it

Reviewed on June 28, 2006


Romantic sensual dream sung with mellifluous and exotic voice...
"It Was All A Dream"... to enchant and inspire.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Amy Avatar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2006
You go gorl....
Deliciously, satisfying day dreams...
Some dreams live, some dreams
die and some dreams are immortalized
by Aleja's flowing words.
Amy I. Ramdass

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 26, 2006
Know just what you mean, my friend. The older I get,
the more I wonder what was real and what wasn't. Unfortunately, a
lot of what happened was way too real. . .and the stuff that couldn't of happened d i d. Don't have as many nightmares, though. Once things you are scared will happen happen, you are, like, o-kay. It was terrible, but it didn't kill me. You get up and go on to the
next dream, and the next. Think it's called Surviving. Thanks
for the thought-provoking and searingly honest write. Hugs! 'Pea'

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2006
This is mystical, and tinged with sadness... brilliant hues of life in your words. I really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on March 20, 2006
sometimes life is like that, isn't it...we're dreaming when we think we're living. love the thought, although it is a little bit unnerving.

Reviewed by Meredith Dixon (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2006
Sounds real to me! But maybe you mean that HE was just dreaming and had no reality to bring your life together to a satisfactory reality? Very beautiful and very real. Love from Meredith

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on February 12, 2006
I love robert jude's comment 'yep life is only a dream' And so it is - Sometimes it is up to you to make them come true. They do tell us something about ourself - whether they be night or day dreams. I feel, actually, you were longing for the love you never received and it was showing up thru your mind and heart.

Reviewed on February 8, 2006
A very nice expression, Aleja. Dreams are very important, even the ones we know won't come true,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 31, 2006
Aleja
Well Penned
I too find myself dreaming a lot
get great inspiration from it
"Welcome To The Den"

William
Love & Peace

Reviewed on January 25, 2006
I am ever the optimist...dreams can and do come true...all of mine are being realized. Wonderful piece. Do ya ting Aleja.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 15, 2005
Sometimes I wonder which is the dream, Aleja. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on November 10, 2005
To me, this is the best on of your AD collection thus far.
blessin's Sis Aleja,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 24, 2005
yep, life is indeed a dream ...


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