Tear stained crumpled crimson velvet
satin black rain stained pumps to match
Wardrobe of a tainted romance
shattered heart, accessory to accompany
Scathed the heart that swoons to soon
adorned in crimson velvet, ready for love
Mr. Right awaits, devil in disguise
dripping candles hinting romance
Pearly smile undertowed swells of lies
let me love you, forever you will be mine
Faint the mind ruled by foolish heart
instantaneous love, margarita mix
Pass the salt, savor the sweat
inebriated desire now stains the lips
sweet intoxication, dulled and foggy senses
two hundred dollars later, all in a nights work
(c)2005
~Nikki~
I liked this "Emancipated Intoxication". The depicting of the actions setting the net picture at the closing line with its brilliant imagery combination, made this a poetic grand.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A most wonderful day to you and yours, overflowing with
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Happy Thanksgiving!
good write
johm+
Tracey xoox(c :)42
Superbly written!
Love,
Eileen