Elizabeth, Richard Orey, author of "The Paradise of Revenge" referred me to your site and this poem. I'm glad he did because it defines explicitly the horror of rape. My book, "When Justice is Served" exemplifies the traumatic ramifications of rape on a young woman's life and how it effects every hope and dream that gave impetus to her life.

You've captured the life-devastation in your poem, and specifically, in the last line: "Sanity will leave you now".

A great write, Elizabeth. In 84 words you offer a glimpse into the total agony that victims of this terrible act live with.

AuthorsDen writer Jeanette Cooper uses 332 pages to unfold the story in her brilliant novel, "When Justice is Served."

I give it two treatments: In my posted story-poem "And Lead Us Not..." I suggest the mental suffering which flows from it. In my novel "The Paradise of Revenge," I spend 572 pages exploring in depth the trauma-generated psychosis of the primary victim, the emotional agony of the wife of the innocent but convicted rapist, and the tortuous life endured by the young son of the innocent rapist.

Rape is a horrendous crime with untoward personal and emotional ramifications.
Your closing line says it all: "Sanity will leave you now."

A brave and meaningful offering, Elizabeth.

Richard

Poignant and deep. Those images of horror that crop up from down below can really catch you off guard. I weep. Imagery great but painful. excellent poem. Liz

It's been years and yet reading this, my heart still began to beat faster. Wow, it's always inside, isn't it, no matter how many years pass. Powerful words. I found peace and pray you do or did, too!

Your graphic words sear the souls of decent and normal persons.
On behalf of MANkind, I apologize, saying sincerely to you,Sweet Lady, "I am so sorry." - Bill Broome

you did an awesome job of expressing the absolute horror of such a violent act. you wrote well

I know it is not easy to write on things like this but it is healing. You are strong and your a servivor.
Hugs Angela

Liz, I commend you on being able to write on this subject. You are a brave soul. Bless you.
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Wow! Painfully vivid, yet so well written!