You've expressed the subconscious conversation many have with their particular "Ruling Spirit"...

Those conversations continue to travel through space searching for a "listener" for eternity. You've captured one and placed it here for all to read. Thank you.

This poem was so moving!
I felt the pull...
Sounds so much like the a poem I wrote recently too!
sounds like it's in the air
mine was on lack of faith and feeling whispers...
I like your style (glad I gravitated to you)
I will be back again, I started TRACking/Following your heart and soul!

BE SAFE!
BE Happy!
STay POsitive!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox

Your emotional rivers run deep Elizabeth. Powerful write, heart rending almost!

Light and Wisdom ...

Compelling verses that reach the depth of the soul, Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing them. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Elizabeth Melton Parsons-- How can anyone with such a beautiful, melodic name write verses with such feelings of unbearable aloneness, pleading for release?

You captured the agony of loneliness completely, Elizabeth. As a sensitive human soul, I want to rush to your side to comfort you, to assure you that things will be better, that things can and do change, that you do have a future filled with wonder and love.

Wow! You really get to me.
Strong imagery, powerful phrasing.
A great write, Elizabeth.
Now, for your next poem let's try Disneyland at night!

Love to you,
Richard

Bless you! That is one of the most wonderful things about writing poetry..you can spill your heart out and sometimes it enables us to better cope with our "Loneliness and renew our spirit and strengthening our Faith
Don't walk alone any more the Master will hear your ardent pleas_in my opining take his Hand and walked with him
Great job..well written and A great message withing and
Stunning emotions and so very painful!!
Take Care Love And Peace To You Always..Morning star

Hi! Friend!, Elizabeth, Hope this new day finds you well. I read your poem,"Lonely Spirit". These words describe sheer lonliness and a spirit that wants forgiveness (My opinion), Great work! . Keep it up.
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Sad words for a sad spirit whose wanderings brought the spirit to the end. Liz

Your choice of words, and the rhythm established and the emotion is a joy to read.

Love it!

Elizabeth

Splendid poetry, Elizabeth! "Lonely Spirit" is a descriptive gem! I'm glad I didn't miss this one!

Quite sad, but quite powerful, Elizabeth.

Elizabeth

Very painful and despairing....
We must never, ever give up Hope and Trust in the Source of All Good..
These little things....are sent to try us..

Hugs

Peter