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Traces of Life
by Lawrance G Lux → (All Poetry by Lawrance G Lux)
  
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The Death bed scene, so often cursed; but visited on Everyone.

Around slips the night shades,
Those blind Oracles known;
Their last pale light to fade
When One's life is blown.


Calling feebly from Night's dark,
Hoping for one last reminisce
Before onset of the stark;
One final Muse presence.


Cold lips belabored cruel
By coming complete loss of energy,
Straining to form thin gruel;
Language lacking singular synergy.


Survivors sit quiet in the fading light,
Not quite understanding the last gasps;
Thinking of the glow once bright,
Now being lost in a last clasp.


Copyright.LawranceGeorgeLux


 


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 Reviews of "Traces of Life"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on September 30, 2003
Superb writing...these traces of life are so eloquently expressed. Thank you so much, Lawrance, for the kind comments on my work as well. May peace be with you.
Amor

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Your third stanza my favorite.
Taylor

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
Very well written poem! ~Z~

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 28, 2003
well said


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