Her Garden
Her garden, in retrospect…
Once an elixir, a passion
tended from cutting and seed.
She now bends to its release.
Surrounds of stacked stone
enmeshed in ivy’s blue-green,
tendrils tenaciously cling entwined,
outlining life’s disarray,
when a moment unexpectedly
took her away
from her flowers and her soil.
Jagged-edged weeds and the
choke of astilbe profusion
meander in puzzles of rocky paths, dew infused,
leading her to unknown places and life to relearn
in solitude sans embrace.
Arching pines enhance, tall and sheltering,
soft needled, sap laden
as antique roses caress
climbing above peony’s pink
gracing the confines of this feminine creation.
The work of her once patient hands
Nature’s demons now devour.
Cushions of angel haired herbs
season liriope triangles,
spider-like beneath lilac spires and hosta variegation.
A latticed bench stands empty
gathering moss upon its weathered teak,
a place where lovers should be stealing kisses
to an engagement of columbine, forget-me-nots,
and bleeding hearts.
Bold corners burgeon with hydrangea’s pristine whiteness
and bridal veil’s rivaling lace
dangling in pendulous balance as life,
amid delicate flowered cones
and rich green leaves,
endures in absencia.
Grassy waves ramble soft and wet under foot
While an angel dips toes in placid waters
awaiting ruffled feathers splashing, sundial timed,
in a perennial spa
as warm afternoon commingles with evening
and chipmunks play hide and seek with the butterflies
amid shade of phlox umbrellas and innocent daisy clusters.
All once an inspiration, an addiction
every species on the tip of her tongue…
a dawn to dusk ritual of self-indulgence
lies now in nature’s mercy,
beneath the tender’s wistful eye,
abandoned as daylilies bore seed
and sedum flowered, now a tangle
in anticipation of tomorrow’s hope
washed in yesterday’s tears.
Iris tubers multiplied,
purple lambs-ear carpeted,
fuzzily blanketing the rich earth.
Freshly bathed birds borrowed ragged snippets ,
nested in the thorny bramble
and nibbled pyracantha berries while
perched above black-eyed Susan’s choking mass
preparing for another day.
As did she, until
life unintentionally took her away
to other gardens and needs to tend.
But her seeds and roots remain with her;
they will blossom again.
Taylor Ryan
April 2007
Gardening to me, is a Passion (as writing, cooking etc.)
but your words Tay- I could feel myselt THERE!
your words tantalize my thoughts!
WONDERFULLY done and felt!
Warmly, Warrior Purple Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive!
STay SAFE!
Heal, LOVE and Believe!
:-)
they will blossom again
I love these closing lines! I love the whole poem but these two lines put a lump in my throat...
Love,
Myrna
Terry
"All once an inspiration, an addiction
every species on the tip of her tongue…
a dawn to dusk ritual of self-indulgence
lies now in nature’s mercy,
beneath the tender’s wistful eye,"
To me, this poem is about an unexpected change that has occurred in her life and how this change has affected who she was vs. whom she has become:
"...preparing for another day.
As did she, until
life unintentionally took her away
to other gardens and needs to tend."
I suspect it would require a very powerful force to change her in this way -to cause her to forsake her precious garden for "other gardens to tend." I think it must be love -a new love which has brought about this change in her. I love the knowing optimism in the last two lines:
"But her seeds and roots remain with her;
they will blossom again."
This is one of the most powerful pieces of writing I have ever read. I have this haunting curiosity nagging at me to know what it is that has taken her away. Please let me know if I have made faulty assumtions or if I have read too much into this -but I don't think I have...
Your friend,
~Butch
Regis
Outstanding...I loved this
Allen
Love tinka
Your poem and garden were exquisitely described. Life seems to center around whatever means the most to us but sometimes we get sidetracked only to find our way back to the delicacies which brought us there in the first place. I hope this made sense because poetically speaking it gets no better than this.
Love,
CJ
Though, -i'm bonkers- i love wild gardens, to me they tell many stories, depending where my little brain meanders.
Good work, the passing through life..
season liriope triangles,
spider-like beneath lilac spires and hosta variegation.
one of the many splendid images in this flowering poem ...
a poem son of excellence and beauty is poetized under the smiles of ERATO.
I salute You, Poet.
In reverent admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
Eileen