Long time ago, when Moon was younger
And stars at night too bountiful to number,
The Sun commended its ferocious heat
To one young girl - the gift was bittersweet.
Naive, the girl accepted with desire
Oblivious to devastating fire.
On Summer nights about love
She talked to stars that shine above.
And waking up when birds still doze
She whispered tenderly to roses
That were enchanted by her voice
And opened petals to rejoice.
On warm Spring days when flowers bloomed
And birds of thousand colors sang their tunes
The fire blossomed in the fledgeling soul
And prompted it was time to reach the goal.
She soared high above the fruited plains
To shine with stars, devoid of earthly pains,
Plunged back to Earth, to silky bed of roses
To find in fragile petals her repose.
The girl believed with all her simple heart
That rose embodies love’s exquisite art.
Oblivious to the hidden woes
That lurk in shadows of both love and rose.
One day she’d want to get too close to rose,
And hold the flower to her heart exposed...
A sting, a cry of pain, a drop of blood
And... rose is no longer symbol of your love.
Naïve, her soul had not the slightest clue
That love can also make the people blue:
Not always fireworks and festival of joy
Sometimes it may a trusting heart destroy.
The thorns of lovely flowers tear the flesh,
Blood flows freely out of the gash.
It takes forever for the wounds to heal
But we cannot contain romantic zeal.
Long time ago, when Moon was very young
The stars revealed half-truths and held their tongue
That time may come when lonesome, grieving soul
Will no longer want to join their ball.
From distant Earth a pair of saddened eyes
In dead of night when stars forget to rise,
Will be a grim reminder of the years long gone
Since that obscure Spring when Moon was young.
By Liana Margiva
Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov.
Creativity and Peace.
I have enjoyed the reading of "When Moon Was Younger" for its painting of visions and emotions.
Lady Poet Liana Margiva, everytime I read Your short stories and poetry, I think that the great Master Mikhail Bulgakov, would be proud to live in Your era.
I wish You a long healthy life through a blissful living!
Viva the Poet!
In reverent appreciation,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
enjoyed reading your inspiring work
Never Stop Writing!!
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Peace & Blessings <
Carolyn
Micki
Jon Michael
Diana....
A lovely and sweet poem so touching to the heart.
Beautifully penned!
Lady Mary Ann
“Like a rose with its fragrance, petals, and thorns; the experience of love often involves enchantment, ecstasy, and misery.”
Thank you for sharing this gift, Liana. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
Peace to you... rlc
It is so interesting how your translator retained the rhyme even when translating from Russian as well as the meaning. Quite a challenge!
Ron