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The Preemptive Metaphor of My Soul"
by Kimmy Van Kooten → (All Poetry by Kimmy Van Kooten)
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This particular poem can be catogorized as poetry of spirituality, inspirational or the language of deity

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In the numinous of inner-ness
I nod . . .
Bodiless, in Hallowed . . .
My God!

Explicitly, implicitly
No fixing flesh statistically
I see, indwelling parts that exist in me
Duality in my being . . .

Embodying enmeshment
. . . just another "carnal" in contempt
Romanticizing sex . . . to treating God’s creations with disrespect
"Revelations’ IS scientific!"

Being, "aspective" in "partative" . . . my obligations casting inward
Eschatological invisible, sacramentally impenetrable
A "callosal agenesis"
I pray, make the impalpable anthesis!

A transcendent, wholly other
A coming, prodigious wife and mother!
I can’t shout, "My neurons made me do it!"
"Far out Farley, the freak fan groovy man!"

There. . . I did it!




 




Copyright 2007
Kimmy Van Kooten
 
 


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 Reviews of "The Preemptive Metaphor of My Soul""
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 28, 2010
And you did it well!
April 2007 ... my gosh
those were good days on AD.

"Impalpable anthesis?" (-:
That which is incapable of being
percieved finding the perfect moment
for the budding and unfolding of blossoms.

Peace
r

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
Great poem. God resides inside of you and each and everyone of us. Thank you for this reminder.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed on May 6, 2007
This is a story right Kimmy!
YOu are truly flexible with many characters~!
YOu have many kids and your minds goes in these directions!
YOU amaze me!
This is super Clever!

WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeeoox
BE SAFE!
STay Strong and POsitive!

Reviewed on April 29, 2007
well Kimmy I finally got out of the forest, and now Im into your soul, duality in your being, i can relate to this my dear

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
Kimmy,

Very clever expression of the rival between carnal and spiritual self!
St. Paul would have approved, I think! :)

Love, Rhonda

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 26, 2007
"Revelations’ IS scientific!"

How true the duality of life.....


nicely expressed...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Wise woman's satire :).......enjoyed!!!!!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Whoa! Love your picture, looks like one of my family get togethers, ha, ha, ha. Great imagination and so full of play. Really enjoyed this.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 25, 2007
Yes!!! your neurons made you to do it, among Einstein, Marylin, Prince
Flash Gordon and Juan Valdez (to mention just a few in the photo) your
soul can't be more "aspective" or "partative" but it is "eschatological" visible.
WOW!!!....and WOW!!! again.
Georg

Reviewed on April 24, 2007
EXCELLENT thought provoking verse, Kimmy, well done! The classic battle 'twixt good and evil portrayed in engaging verse! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

The spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak...

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Quite a mix of Philosophy-Sartre and perhaps the war between our flesh and spirit. Great write.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
an aesthetic conglomeration of inspired thoughts imbued with discerning concepts as well as a lot of fun to read ...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Wonderful...as I read this poem I imagined you standing before a herd of poets at a 'slam' and of course, you won!

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Great fun, Kimmy. Passionate, imaginative, super playful, and at its core, profound. Jerelyn

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Playful and striking rhyme in this introspection.

Brett

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
I like it and though not sure of all the big words it does give the reader a great glimpse inside the spiritual and also the mind of Kimmie. I love how you have made it all come together as introspective as you have but still with such an image of a smile on your face as you write it.

Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
A very heart and soulful write my friend, I agree with Jeanette...I too believe that man's inner heart and soul is where God's spirit resides! His spirit guides us, however it is up to us to make the ultimate choice and act upon them. Very profound write indeed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
I like Jeanette's thoughts on this write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Deep offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 24, 2007

Deep thought and emotions poemized in heart that pumps wisdom.
"The Preemptive Metaphor of My Soul" has depicted a great soul.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Kimmy, your poem embodies some deep thought and also inspires it. My belief is that the soul is man's inner temple where God Almighty resides. I believe He is an internal entitity who leaves us with free choice between good and evil. He is there, inside us, to promote our actions toward good, but He takes a back seat when we choose to delve in evil. It is not up to Him to clear unrigiteous paths toward good and decency. Rather, he rewards each individual who chooses a righteous path for himself. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
A eschatologist in her own right, a mesmer of mischief. I'm your yankee doodle, tweedle dee dee!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2007
Nothing, no nothing is better or larger than the inner man.
A modern reminder about our temple..Triff'


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