As the tears flow
Thru the window...
A cup fill's
That no one has taken...
A drink from...!
Soon the tears will have dried up...!
And the cup shall never be tasted
Again...
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Reviews of "Cups..."
Reviewed by Mr.and Mrs. Mundo Canto
Reviewed on April 16, 2003
Sad and very touching. Great write.
Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2003
Sad & sweet...but throw the tears out the window and let's pour a glass of merlot :-)
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Love
Tinka
Pretty deep with so
few words...
Keep your chin up...
Talk to you later...
Hugs,
Trixie
peggy
It lacks the killer punch that could floor me but it still has all the essence of a good solid intruiging poem.
namaste
Love and peace,
Susan
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