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The evanescent f(e)ather image
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
Wednesday, June 17, 2015    Rated "G" by the Author.
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posting again... about a bridge, my birthplace...

 

I was born at the birth of a bridge...

A palindrom, arms open to bridge 
a chasm
a meeting in the middle of nowhere:
my old dream.

A two way nonsense that makes sense
somewhere in the middle.

A mirror carefully placed
on my face 
the perfect simmetry
of you,
(both) life and death
- a cemetery for both me and you - .

I was born on the other side, the other side of that mirror 
you want me to carry.

A bridge reunites two sides of a coin. Though sometimes I'm an island
in spellbound isolation.

An island reunites with the sea, and from the middle of the bridge,
you can choose your nowhere.

The bridge is my tree. I sit at its roots, watch its shadow over the sea. 

But when I'm tired of roots and anchors, I sail again to become an island.

A fatherless I-land, unprotected by a fatherland: 
a featherland.

I am from everywhere.




 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The evanescent f(e)ather image"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 28, 2015
So lovely! And wonderful to read you again!
This poem had breathtaking imagery and language and speaks to me of recovering our own divine love from within, our birthright.
Blessings, Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 21, 2015
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'a meeting in the middle of nowhere'...'...and from the middle of the bridge, you can choose your nowhere.' ------ I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! So nice to see YOU, Axilea!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 18, 2015
... And from nowhere. I like the symmetry between words--the parallelism between images. I keep thinking about that mirror, about it's being a place to bury yourself as well as a place to live. But the analogy goes even further. Life can be an illusion, but a useful one. In massage therapy, mirrors are successfully used to massage phantom limbs of amputee victims. They can fill in the gaps, so we become more than our sum total. I w as thinking, too, that water has that same quality. It ehnhqnces, if it's still. If not, it contorts an image.

I really love that you are an "I-land". I feel very much hat way too--especially father-less just now. These are visuals and ideas I want to explore more. --Charlie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 18, 2015
You have written a very ethereal piece that can probably only be understood by you.

Ron

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on June 18, 2015
When we are born, we all cross that bridge from the ethereal to the real.
There is a story the says babies still know the secrets of the universe, and the other side. Their cooing and billing is an attempt to tell their adults what they still know. But alas, but the time they are able to talk and express concepts, they have forgotten the things they were trying to tell us.

I love this poetry.

Walt

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2015
You are from everywhere with all your travels and all
the witnessing with your young life...happy to see
you posting again!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 17, 2015
I am quite spell-bound by your verses, Axilea. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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