The chill is in the air Life just ain't always fair
The wind blows right through your clothes
Desperate and lonely
The plants hibernate
No food no money
People hesitate to smile
The Social Security System Depletes your life
The Welfare System Surrounds you in strife
You can't understand How you ended up here
You can't look forward to another long year
Your family's forgot you You are left alone
You have tattered clothing One room is your home
Your teeth are gone
Your dentures are broken
The Government renders you Hopelessly
choking .....
Then comes INDIGESTION
THEN comes CONSTIPATION
Then comes ORGAN DYSFUNCTION
THEN comes the final FALL DOWN THE MOUNTAIN
* This is SAD very Sad, so much happening around us, The goverment is bleeding us dry!
WHERE!????? Are you Karen??? * I read your Bio!
I can feel your heart and causes deeply!
YOur poem here, is a gem of a treasure! I plan to savorrrrrrrr.. forever!
I hope you come back to WRite, it's now Feb. (almost March 07)
WArmly,WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
I agree with you, and BETTE below - BABY BOOMERS UNITE! AARP MEMBERS UNITE! WRITE!
CALL! BITCH! MOAN!
WHAT would the 400 BILLION DOLLARS BLOWN IN IRAQ DO HERE AT HOME?
THERE SHOULD NOT BE ANY HOMELESS IN THIS RICHEST NATION!
SEE MY "GOLDEN YEARS". TOM.
Fee
Very well expressed thoughts and concerns!!
Excellent Imagery and flow outstanding view
Of how sad it's to grow old and no one
needs you anymore so your left to live in loneliness
Excellent message within.
Love And Peace To You And Merry Christmas!!
Love and Happy Christmas,
CJ
This is a well-written poem that seems to come from the soul of one who really cares about our elderly. I'm one of those elderly but still vibrant and active, thanks to God. But I know what you're saying about the sad condition of our System when it comes to social programs, especially for the more vulnerable elderly, not to mention our physically- and mentally-challenged citizens of all ages.
Our cultural problems are growing worse, thanks to greedy politicians who are allowing more and more people into the already fragile SYSTEM. The children of the elderly who seem not to care are only part of the problem. I want to believe that the majority do care about their elderly parents. I feel that they are caught up in the same trap their parents are caught in: a government system that won't let people get ahead so that they are ill-equipped financially to help their parents, even when they want to. Too busy with their own families and the never-ending struggle to "make ends meet."
This is a very sad poem that wiped the Christmas smile right off my face.
But it's REALITY and we must face it. Perhaps this will inspire people to take second looks at themselves and help their parents more. ... Even if it's a personal sacrifice, the joy you give your parents will be worth it.
As for our politicians: WE ELECTED THEM AND WE CAN FIRE THEM! We must all get on our soapboxes and write our legislators, encouraging them to improve Social Security and other social programs ... to write stronger laws to protect the vulnerable, ALL ill and elderly people of our society.
Betty Dravis
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