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Wet Weekend in Transsylvania (TOLT)
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A rondeau redouble to chill the heart.

Picture the scene: The autumn of 1825, an inn at the edge of a remote village in a land of deep dark forests where strange creatures roam the shadows and only the very poor and the very foolish go bare headed. Only a sturdy hat or garlic garland (both if you can afford them) will keep the shadowy creatures at bay.

By the flickering light of a soot blackened oil lamp villagers gossip, overheard by strangers who have broken their journey to shelter from the storm......


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 WET WEEKEND IN TRANSSYLVANIA


The rain falls hard here on a naked head.
All travellers are wise to keep indoors;
So buy a hat - put garlic round your head.
We'll spend this night time mopping up the floors.
 

The healers ply their trade and offer cures
For all the ills the common people dread.
The rich pay fees that subsidise the poor.
The rain falls hard here on a naked head,
 

And when the keening wind would wake the dead
A silver pelt slinks forward on soft paws.
The wolves have young all waiting to be fed,
So travellers are wise to keep indoors.
 

However much they bring, the whelps want more.
Yes, stay indoors enjoying soup and bread.
A sword or gun won't even up the score,
Nor will a hat. Put garlic round your head.
 

Those who decide to safeguard heart and head,
But lodgings are more than they can afford
Could offer to wash dishes here instead,
Or spend the night time mopping up the floors.
                            The rain falls hard here.
 

 

©2008 Susan M Phillips, revised 2009. No reproduction of this poem is permitted without the author's permission.

 


WET WEEKEND IN TRANSSYLVANIA

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Wet Weekend in Transsylvania (TOLT)"
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on April 3, 2008
I really like seeing folks work in forms...you did extremely well with this. The flow is very good, the imagery is haunting, downright spooky and yet exciting. It is the type of thing I can imagine being done by a bard, to a wide eyed audience near a fire.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on March 12, 2008
The atmosphere here is tantalisingly tangible...I am spooked, scared but intensely curious...I'd really like to know what happens next..!! Love, Diana.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Nicely done, Susan. You have chosen a difficult form to tell your tale but you have done it well. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
Great job, Sue! I am still not brave enough to try a Rondeau... let alone a Rondeau redoubler!
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
And as night falls the winged living dead shall arise, great write....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on February 15, 2008
I say that was pretty darn good, Sue. You ought to be proud of yourself! --Charlie


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