THANK YOU (poem) by Bill Grimes Jr. on AuthorsDen

THANK YOU
by Bill Grimes Jr. → (All Poetry by Bill Grimes Jr.)
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A clown cries on the inside I’m guilty of the same Living in the deep end Tripping to a different tune indeed At times Victim of my own naivety Gullible some will say Trusting nonetheless I’ve trudged through the fire Been forced to drink theatrics Tiptoed through social minefields Wallowed in self pity Called hell on earth my home Please don’t ask me how I’ll share it with you now Such drama Only drags me down Time to lose the frown Numb from false mechanics Bewildered by the lies Blunt paranoia Shared by all us puppets Still I dig the bass line Ripping guitar riffs It’s all about the groove Music is my fix My soul still comes alive with every beat Friends with smiling eyes They fascinate me so Dancing with sincerity Penetrating love Tranquility Thought of major focus Today Forever Anxiously I wait His holy paradise Magnificent On the other side God’s master plan I’m scarred beyond recognition Unworthy Certainly soiled Then gently rebuilt Crafted in His precious image It’s hard for me to fathom Such unconditional grace After all the bad I’ve done Quite simple in verity He saved me from myself In His loving arms I’ll stay Thank you Father Thank you……. John 15:5 (King James Version) ⁵I am the vine, ye are the branches: He that abideth in me, and I in him, the same bringeth forth much fruit: for without me ye can do nothing. © Bill Grimes Jr. 2009

Reviewed by Linda Zebsokey

Reviewed on July 29, 2009

Okay, my friend, you have saturated my soul with the rhyme of heaven in this write. If I had read it Sunday morning, I wouldn't have needed to go to church to get my weekly fix!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

God bless you for the sincerity and wisdom you share...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

A well written piece,Great poem,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 26, 2009

Very inspirational. Thank you.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Wonderful writing sweet man and I thank you..stay safe and well...always...Hugss