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The Loon
by Walt Hardester → (All Poetry by Walt Hardester)
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Upon still waters she doth glide,
Her mate no longer at her side.

Loneliness now pervades her heart,
Her lifelong love and she did part.

The reason why she does not know,
Just that it was his time to go.

Alone she cries her sorrowful song,
Hoping it won't be so long.

That he and she will meet again,
In a place that never ends.

© 2007 Walt Hardester

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 Reviews of "The Loon"
Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on August 4, 2016
that really is a very sad piece of poetry, very well written,
thanks for sharing.
Steve

Reviewed on July 1, 2016
Wonderful pen Walt I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing it with us!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 10, 2011
Their haunting calls is a beautiful part of nature that fits well as the background for beautiful music. Beautiful yet sad write.

Reviewed by Penny Tidwell (Reader)
Reviewed on December 19, 2009
what insite! I can honestly say I know what the Loon feels - first hand......Life must go on.... thanks for all your stories, and poems...you have touched my soul.

Penny

Reviewed by Dori Daigle (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
I have just been doing a "look up" on loons and found your most lovely poem.
Very touching and made very visual for me.

Thank you
Dori

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on November 20, 2008
The loon has such a plaintive song...A poignant poem that makes one think about the essence of life and death. I really like the picture!.....M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 23, 2008
There's something special about the call of the loon. Thank you, Walt. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Don'[ have loons on Lisa Lake here at home, have swans sometimes, mallard ducks, sea gulls. Would like to eventually see a real loon, from your description and photo I truly would.

Reviewed on March 30, 2008
A beautiful fowl, the Loon, and so faithful they be. Truly enjoyed this descriptive poem of loss!

Micke

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Faithful write ~ As it should be...Ted

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on September 23, 2007
A beautiful and poignant write my friend. Love lost affects us all, human, birds, and animals alike. There are many animals that mate for life also. I'm sure Mr. Ed could name them all. Having never heard a loon but being a loony, I can imagine the sadness of the cry.
Thank You,
Ann

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
There is nothing like the tranquility call of the Loon. This hits home as it is our state bird (MN); A 15 mile boat ride,, to my parents cabin,,on Namakan lake, is a hideaway, I have grown with, the beauty,, and the call of the loon, will forever be within me.
I enjoyed this more than you could know.

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
What a touching observation to make in a poem. I never thought of it, and I love loons--the lonely cry of them up North on a mountain lake, but when you see them here in the South, there always alone and silent. I wonder, do loons mate for life? Beautiful pic, did you take it? You have some many more wonderful poems I have to get to!
best, mike

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2007
Very beautiful pen....Hugssssssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
This is so lovely Walt! EdK would adore this one the loons are his favorites. I have a midi of their sounds they are hauntingly beautiful.Thanks for sharing. Have missed you;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Awwwww! This is such a heartwrenching tale, but written so delicately with such passion.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
A Beautiful Poetic write Walt
Thanks for sharing
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Dana Reed
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Walt, that's a beautiful poem for a gorgeous bird. It fits every living creature who's ever loved and lost their mate. Great job.

Dana

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Walt, this is truly a beautiful heart touching writing. This could also be used as a metaphor for a lost lover. I enjoyed this greatly.

Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Beautifully said and felt Walt!
Relationships of all kinds, feel the utter loneliness and some
have no reason why!
Hang in, I feel sadness
Many warm hugs to YOU!
Love the Loon!

Warm hugs and Warmer love! Warrior Lady Sheeeoox

STay Positive! Healthy and STrong!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Beautiful metaphor here . . . Very nice . . .

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Sad and poignant work. It brings back fond memories of "On Golden Pond."

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
You're making us take out our hankies! Great photo, too!

Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Heart touching Walt, beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
I can so hear that lonely haunting call, a few weaks back I went camping and this simple loon lay off shore the beach almost the entire time singing this same song...sweet.

Fee

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
What a simple, beautiful look into the quiet heart of a loon.

Larry

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Walt it appears that the heart works this way, a great write and thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Information: Did you know that swans are monogamous and that never take another mate should theirs die?
Maybe we should learn a little fedility from the birds, we sure don't learn from each other.
Georg

Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Such a deep yearn! You vividly illustrated the feelings of a heart kept lonely in the waters of love

Reviewed by Jean Sharp-Latham
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Beautiful pain... that those of us lucky enough to experience love enough that one day we may feel that pain... then the joy of knowing the sun comes up over the horizen never to be dark again. Loved it Walt! Jean

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
The yearning in this one is almost touchable...I guess there is a "loon" hidden deep inside of us!!

Sweet....bittersweet offering!!

Love Tinky

Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Reviewed on September 20, 2007
Nice work, this truly will help keep peotry alive!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
...a silent write of hope...with only song of sadness heard.
well written...
John

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
This one is sweet, Walk, and lonesome and mournful. Sad and hopeful at the same time!

Ted

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Cutie Pie! I truly adores Ya! Lovin You! Sissy

Reviewed on September 19, 2007
What a beautiful poem you've penned, Walt. They have such a haunting cry: enjoyed this one very much. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on September 19, 2007
How I love the sound of the loon: so mysterious, so unusual, so...spooky, especially when it's as dark as pitch outside! Very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Oh, you're talking about the animal and here I thought you were speaking of yourself...e ;)

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
Bonded together for life unto death. Something that our society should embrace rather than discard like an old pair of shoes.

For those whose life together is separated by death, I'm sure they too have a sorrowful song -- until they meet again.

This is a very moving and spiritual write. I'm glad I got to read it and have my life enriched.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 19, 2007
so very sad when they cry-not so different from us in the same situation


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