After reading it as a love poem, I had to start fresh and read it with a different perspective. If we know we are safe in the arms of Jesus Christ, death is welcome and the poem is beautiful and meaningful.
Be sure!
Connie
Reviewed by Nance O'Donnell (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2009
WOW........I like this one Walt.....intense
Nance (POF)
It wasn't readily apparent that this was Death approaching ... which means that you write very well :)!
Also, after having witnessed several deaths and/or their aftermaths, to go quietly in the night would be a blessing to most of us.
Write on ...
Sandy
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
I love the sense of mysticism in your words. Wonderful.
When that times does arrive,
I home I am gone by 5
A.M.
Intense knowing poem!
Sounds like intense Love of Sexual Togetherness!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
Walt kinda a dark when you mention Come gently to me in the night, An everlasting, peaceful death. Mybe we will all show up with Georg Mateos and have a big party to clean up the cobb webs. Thank you for sharing Walt.
Well, I don't know what all this sadness is about but I see a man imagining his women. "Come Gently To Me" You know, instead of like a madwomen with claws and stuff... Change the spelling of a few "Comes" and you got yourself in morning bliss! ...the little death...
Is it me...? Am I that distorted? HA!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Time to take your muse on a bike ride.....just take care of the cops...and don't allow your morning muse to fly with those wings...she might fly away!!
Knowing you like I do...I know this is a poem. Just a poem. I know your demons and they aren't about to cash in. Your positive side is winning more every day. Let's keep it that way too.
Love,
Susan
Glad it was only your muse talkin'; but don't SCARE me like that! I already have high blood pressure; don't need to stroke out!! Very well penned; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( *gasp, gasp, gasp* STAT!! I need OXYGEN!!!! LOL
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2008
Let us not rush it Walt
We all needs ya here at AD
Great poem anyways
Ron
Ooh, I wasn't ready for that ending my friend. Reminded me of a prayer that my grandmother prayed on her death bed...a bit scary, sad, and...well I hope all is okay! A powerful and thought provoking poem...
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
This saturday you are in a foul mood, maybe I should bank on your door with a case of Coors or a bottle of Captain Morgan dark rum to take away the cobwebs in you brain.
Let death alone and join the party!!!!!
Anyway, your write is cool.
Georg
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Be sure!
Connie
Nance (POF)
Also, after having witnessed several deaths and/or their aftermaths, to go quietly in the night would be a blessing to most of us.
Write on ...
Sandy
Cryssa
I home I am gone by 5
A.M.
Intense knowing poem!
Sounds like intense Love of Sexual Togetherness!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Is it me...? Am I that distorted? HA!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
ET
Christine
Regis
Love offering...on the edge of darkness!!
Love Tinka
Carole~
love the peacefulness of it
peace be with you
William
Knowing you like I do...I know this is a poem. Just a poem. I know your demons and they aren't about to cash in. Your positive side is winning more every day. Let's keep it that way too.
Love,
Susan
Fee
Glad it was only your muse talkin'; but don't SCARE me like that! I already have high blood pressure; don't need to stroke out!! Very well penned; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( *gasp, gasp, gasp* STAT!! I need OXYGEN!!!! LOL
We all needs ya here at AD
Great poem anyways
Ron
F~
Blessings from Ky.
Joyce B.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Let death alone and join the party!!!!!
Anyway, your write is cool.
Georg