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She Dances
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A poem that I really am fond of

She Dances
 






She stands in the garden,
the winter sun shining,
though wispy gray clouds,
pass high in the sky,
the flowers are blooming,
springtime is looming,
the breeze gently tinkling,
the wind-chimes nearby.

Slowly, she twirls,
with her arms gently swaying,
her dress, flows, in layered chiffon,
as she goes,
she looks to the sky,
 gently closes her eyes,
moving, to the music,
 that only she knows.

She spins, she dips, she leaps,
slowly turning,
soft layers of fabric,
fanning out, gracefully,
gently, shes weeping,
while rhythm keeping,
her soul, touching something,
 that no one can see.

She waltzes, so gently,
ethereally floating,
as light as the air,
gracefully, as a dove,
she, as if holding,
her arms, gently folding,
they say, around the ghost,
 of her love.

Theres peace, yet sadness,
etched on her face,
the gentle breeze,
drying her tears, as they fall,
she spins, slowly wilting,
bending and tilting,
emotion emiting, the dance,
slows, to a crawl.

Dance fading, she gingerly,
sinks to the ground,
wistfully, opening,
her misty blue eyes,
her vision, still glazes,
 in the distance, she gazes,
her lover, departed,
evidenced by her sighs.

She rises, reluctantly,
 walks through the garden,
shoulders droop, tenderly,
 touching a rose,
her feelings, she hides,
as she heads, back inside,
in new morn, she'll again,
come to take, her repose.


 

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 Reviews of "She Dances"
Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
This one is so real as I can see her before me as I read. Thank you for sharing, you have real talent and I hope to see more of your writes.

Rose

Reviewed on June 1, 2007
How beautiful, I could picture her there in the garden. Lovely work Lady D.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on May 27, 2007
lovely....love the art of motion
expressed well here

Reviewed by Zuzanna Musical (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2007
Beautiful poem with graceful performance of dance. Awesome write L. Desdinova. I could not resist to stop and leave my prints on your Amazing write. It is glorious poem! ~ Zuzanna

Reviewed by Helena Crutchett (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2007
Very touching and beautiful. You captured the movement of her dance in that it just about jumped out of the page! And the winding down of the dance at the end completed a lovely and poignant poem. Well done! ~ Helena ~

Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2007
sammy, this is truly masterfully rendered, ethereal vision, wow! your passion took my breath away!"she dances"... so very sad, heartbreaking.. loved this..mike

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on May 23, 2007
JUST TOO BEAUTIFUL, for mere words, so I shall just SIGH in it's honor! Your awesome talent and vivid imagery brought this write to life for me and it danced before my dazzled eyes! LOVE YOU! SC


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