Only Half The Song (poem) by pat medlin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 22, 2016

'Oh how she loved that cowboy! But only half the song got sung.'---BEAUTIFUL, TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Michael True

Reviewed on July 21, 2013

As a writer of songs the title made me look. The cleverness of your verse sent shivers. In the end I knew exactly what you meant!

Reviewed by Lark Pogue

Reviewed on July 14, 2013

I continue to be amazed by your perspective and creativeness.
L

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)

Reviewed on July 11, 2013

This poem stirred up the dust and let loose big action and visceral aliveness. Neat swish-off ending line. Enjoyed! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on June 30, 2013

very clever. great write!

Reviewed by carolyn duncan

Reviewed on June 19, 2013

Pat - poem reminds me of my youth. Nothing about horses but that doesn't matter! The exultation of feeling "special" and the feeling of summer on my skin. Good work!!

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 18, 2013

Yesterday's remembrances
rightly done *Pat*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 18, 2013

enjoyed you write pat

I remember something similar but it took place on a large city street

I wasn't a cowboy, never wanted to be, but I was kool in my Marine dress blues during furlough somewhere
along the line, she was divinely beautiful short black hair, poodle skirt, white shoes and bobby socks carrying her books across her breast, chewing gum cracking snapping bubbles, remember it just like it was yesterday

Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on June 18, 2013

Very nicely done, Pat...brought me back to those magical feelings when I didn't have a clue what it was all about, but it was exciting nonetheless...

Anna

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

I have been down that trail before-loved your poem

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

have been there for this one, let me tell he felt the same
budd

Reviewed by Ingeborg von Finsterwalde

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Will we ever find out if they eventually rode off into the sunset together? Wishful thinking on my part�

Ingeborg

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Sounds a bit autobiographical. But still has a lot of magic regardless. Makes me want to hop on a stallion and ride. With her behind me, or at my side.

Ron

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

I think we all had a "magical week of youth" now and then. Damn those cowboys who smell of Juicy Fruit and Jergens!

Love ya

Jane

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

The cowboys always gets their gal

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Ain't dat da way it goes sumtime? Yew git all charged fer tha dance and the song quits slap-dab in da middle. Drat!

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Pat, great piece of writing...love it!
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on June 17, 2013

Brillant pat. Great.