Left Behind (poem) by Christine Alwin on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 4, 2012

'...WINGS FELL WITH HER TEARS...' THIS IS SO POETIC! SO AUTHENTICALLY DESCRIPTIVE OF HOW ONE FEELS WHEN LOVE HAS LEFT THEM BEHIND. CHRISTINE...THANK YOU, ONCE AGAIN,FOR SHARING YOUR AWESOME GIFT WITH US. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 3, 2012

Romatick....tragic...and beautifully penned as usual!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on June 30, 2012

A stillness beautiful in deep emotions.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

Brilliant Poem.
You're my muse
That sends me writing all night.

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

I can see the inspiration your
words so delicately describe!!!
*Christine*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

oh christine this is exquisitly moving...few words revealing separatep meanings to each heart reading it. i feel as though you penned this exclusivly for me

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

It only takes but a few words to explain all and done very well Christine, the picture in itself says more than words can say.

Very good!

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

So deeply touching indeed Laura

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

I appreciate this vivid haiku, and am swept out to see those bereft of freedom alluded to in its cool lines. Evocative and emotive...

Nicely penned, Christine.

Roger

Reviewed by Shirley Houston

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

This is an exquisite write! I feel her pain, and lost innocence. Thank you, poet!

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

Dear Christine,

This is a lovely poetic haiku.
I love the sea.
It's where you go to.
It heals us when your sad and blue.
But we should never forget.
The oceans changing tides.
For The Lord God knows our pain.
He knows all of us deep down inside.

Peace, love and blessings,

JMD

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

A stirring poem that grips the heart and breaks the soul and one that begs for a reply of sorts....

Heart mirrored image
left him the way she found him
drowning far from shore

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on June 29, 2012

Nice senryu, Christine, and great picture to go with it. The angel sans wings and tearful, with a broken heart is enough to make the reader sad. Yep. Ya did good here.