Stain on a carpet (poem) by Rebecca Lerwill on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

Stain on a carpet, a heady memory....
YOU can write about anything and beautifully you did!
Another wind-swept writing creation!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Inspiration and Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Thought provoking
Excellent write
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 25, 2009

OUtstanding !!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 18, 2009

i like this--makes one ponder a bit!

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on January 18, 2009

This is excellent,I like reading this poem very much,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 18, 2009

Reality can be a wake up call can't it. You started this poem soft and dreamy and then bang you hit us with reality, as the poet intended, I am sure. Great delivery!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 18, 2009

beyond the horizon I want to see

So do I!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 18, 2009

One reads this poem with a shadow of a contentment smile,then...oops! that is a stain on your carpet! ! !
Welcome back!

Georg

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

our legacy's are often not well understood -- for our perceptions do not always match those of our successors -- interesting white Becca -- may peace and love be your avenue to joy -- JMW

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

Makes me thik of the song "some where over the rainbow"...way up high...dreaming..and then reality. Great poem Becca!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

Becca haven't seen much of your poetry lately but this one is sure a triumphant return to the den. It definately makes one think and ponder the inevitabilities of life and living. Very nicely done old friend.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

I'm reminded of the quote, Those that forget history are condemned to repeat it, when I read these lines - powerfully thought provoking and moving, Rebecca! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

I have some wonderful tips on stain removal. They are at www.wallysstainremovaltips.com/

Really liked this one.

Walt

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

Thought provoking..
We will leave much behind
love
ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

Amazing when we stop to think of it. Superb metaphor Becca,
stains do last,unfortunately...Excellent poem!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 17, 2009

What we leave behind may be hard to clean up.