By way of return I now have come back... from waters of sea to peril of black. Of days in the sun upon sea spray of foam… to fires of hell near my GoldenState home.
Gliding the waters of unforeseen flame… carried by ship to four ports I became. A spirit of color in Mexico’s arms… the music of life found in tropical charms.
With buckets of beer woven basket of dreams… sunning the moments with sepia cream. A culture of happiness poor in its light… with richness of silver bejeweled in the night.
Set sail upon wave back to port of my birth… holding tight to the memories for all of their worth. And yet how this silver would hence turn to gold… as the hillsides of fire now seemed to take hold.
Dreams of what was were now lost at sea… as embers of flame were dancing towards me. The water I held was welled in my eyes… I had none to spout on the fires demise.
It was ten houses up just round the bend… six houses in flame would come to an end. I grabbed all the seconds and pictures that stood… packed a few memories the ones that I could.
A suitcase unpacked still full of sea air… now mingled with smoke in exchange for despair. I twisted the lock I left the front door… wondering if home sweet home could yet be anymore.
The flames on the hill were across the street… it was then that I left my fate yet to meet. But the angels remembered I’d asked for their wing… as I stood at the bow of a nautical king.
In darkness of night through smoke that had reigned… I had right to come back to see what now remained. The door I had locked was yet still in place… the home thought for lost was standing in grace.
On winds of the water emotion for life… from winds of the earth come turmoil and strife. And yet fallen ashes on ground they still churn… I now have come back by way of return.
' A spirit of color'... 'Dreams of what was were now lost at sea'...'I'd asked for their wing'...'On winds of the wather' I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Why do I get a yearning for sailing when I read you poems. I feel I've been on a wonderful voyage and I don't want to come back. Super poem, Love Bonnie
Powerful write on the most recent forest fire in California in which my grand daughter and her husband and child were also spared and came back to their home which was intact, thank God as many were not that fortunate.
What a tale, sort of metaphysical and trippy,and it sounds like you wound up in Jersey LOL
brilliant style and melody here, enjoyed
I see you put alot of soul and heart into this......pax A
Welcome back John and I agree with Myrna,Wow what a write you offer us today, it is fantastic and you have taken us on a journey as we read each line, thank you very much greatly enjoyed.
wow, what you've been through! -- such a song-like poetic tale of drama. And "by way of return.. you were spared and you pick up the task and go on...I've followed you a bit since August, one of your first posts (Laundry day for angels...) I still fondly remember
blessings anew, michael
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
The many perils of life...how they invade us; creep in when least expecting but to those who are wise they will leave a lesser sting. A powerful poem with so much meaning. Welcome back John, love Holly
Yes! You have returned in one piece to find your home of peace. This is an incredible poem full of expectations and faith. You have been missed John. This particular poem is my favorite and I will cherish it in my treasures of poets here at the Den.
Welcome home!
John, I have now read this piece three times and each has given me a different perspective and changing directions... but the last few stanzas hit me like a brick wall. Whether it is fire or the fury of an approaching hurricane we wonder when we leave what there will be to return to. and yet we stay. Intriguing writing.. It's nice to see a post from you!
Myrna
I also worked the theater. Bob
brilliant style and melody here, enjoyed
I see you put alot of soul and heart into this......pax A
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Welcome home!!
Merry Christmas and a Very Happy New Year to you and yours!!
Love Tinka
Regis
glad to see you back and hope everything is well with you and your family...
Art Sun...
blessings anew, michael
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Love,
Susan
Be safe,
Karen
Myrna