Under the Red Roof (poem) by Bernice Angoh on AuthorsDen

Under the Red Roof
by Bernice Angoh → (All Poetry by Bernice Angoh)
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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when somebody loves you...

Cat-like, she pounced gleefully off the hotel bed towards the man staring at his own reflection on the bathroom mirror His boxers snuggly hung around his perfect lower torso, Adonis would’ve been jealous As she wrapped her arms around him and pressed her perfect mounds on his bare back she noticed his buttocks muscles tightened and smiled He smiled too, locking eyes with hers in the mirror It wasn’t that they’d just made incredible love or that he’d made her feel things she’d never felt before, neither was it because she’d brought him so much pleasure by just loving him as much as she did It was what she saw when she looked into his eyes --never before had a man’s look said so much It was an agreement they made in spirit It was him It was her “It’s you” And they both knew it She was his home and she had found her way home in him Under a battered and timeless red roof. Copyright© 2010 by Bernice Angoh Art by http://sakasagami.deviantart.com/art/In-Your-Arms-143789123

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on November 18, 2012

wow-very nice

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Such a meeting of souls. Awesome. LOVEit. Liz

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2010

Soft and romantic...very touching. Holly

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 25, 2010

Haven't lost your touch, B. Full of love and sweetness. --Charlie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Thank you for sharing this lovely, sensual write, Bernice. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Diana Wiles

Reviewed on March 24, 2010

Yes...I understand: 'It was an agreement they made in spirit...'
This resonates so deeply within me.
A very moving and beautiful poem...

Hugs, Diana..

Reviewed by Cathlene Sares (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2010

Bernice,
This is awesome...I can feel book number three emerging!
Love you,
Auntie Cathy

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 22, 2010

Softly romantic with a taste of erotic. Nicely written, good to see you back here, certainly have missed you...

Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by John Flanagan

"...an agreement they made in spirit.." yes, that's it for it transcends all sensuality and is the key to eternity.
Good to see you posting, Bernice.

John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

The beauty of true love when two really do become one...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

A complete love story within your words Bernice.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Love the soft sensuality and romantic realism of this one Bernice, it says so much of love and how love develops not just lust but the feelings of two who know they were meant to be together. Good to see your name come back up on the posting list.
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