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The World Is Crazy
by Dne Foster → (All Poetry by Dne Foster)
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I tried something new tell me what you think.
The world is crazy I mean take a look around We have people they call homeless sleeping on the ground We have children at the age of 12 baring other children We have people just randomly killing others as if they have no meaning We have tons of pain and hurt around us Very few joy and happiness surrounding us Eyes weep at the very site of the news People falling off their feet with the cold dark blues So I say the world is crazy I mean walk out your front door and tell me what do you see Do you see a world of happiness or a world full animosity? Do you see children laughing or abandon life? In this world we live in do you see the light? We have not only people killing babies But also mothers alike. Who don’t want them, left to face the cold dark nights Leaving them in naturalness places Ashamed of the beauty they have created We have neighborhoods that you can’t walk down the street Parks where kids can’t play and be free And to top it all off we have people who fail to f***ing see. So I say the world is crazy The time we live in is beyond belief Change is needed to the strongest degree But cannot be reached if we wait on our knees Expecting others to do what we need Expecting someone to cradle them, open your dam eyes and see In my life that will never come true so stand up and fight for you Till we make the change none of us will make it through So I say the world is crazy, that’s true

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 9, 2009

Very well written sweet lady..enjoyed......stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 6, 2009

Sadly, so much truth in your words as we all fall into the pit of nothingness....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jms Bell

WRITTEN SO WELL AND SADLY, FILLED WITH A LOT OF TRUTH OF SITUATIONS THAT ONLY GOD CAN MAKE A DIFFERENCE IN. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WORK THAT SOLIDLY SUPPORTS YOUR THEME. JOYCE

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 5, 2009

I agree with everything that you said.This is a well written poem.We live in such scary times and the world is more crazier than ever before.The world lost a big sense of what is truly important and also we have lost humanity.Over the last several years,I've heard some insane things on the news.I remember one time I heard this story about a 70 plus year old man by the name of Angel Torres.He was crossing the street in Connecticut when a car hit him.The driver kept on going and he was laying on the side of the street.The most shocking thing about that is other cars kept driving by and people just stand there and not do a damn thing.Luckily a police cruiser came by and assist the man.

The sheer cold-heartedness of people not being able to help that man as if he was a piece of meat showed me what type of world that we are truly living in.The man could be old enough to be their grandfather or great-grandfather.If it was their own fathers being treated like that,they would appreciate someone helping them.I wish those people who didn't do a thing would be charge for impersonating human beings.

EDWIN

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack

I have even heard and seen of children actually YOUNGER than 12 BEARING babies...the world is crazy its true, but how to change it is the question...no one it seems has a clue...Ed