~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Sailing this sea of blue
~~~~~watching the waves dynamic moves
~~when emotions come…crashing through
~~~~the helm steers expertly back to you
~~~and when the lines are bound and tight
~~~~~~~~~expecting to see the one I like
~~~~~~~~~~~~~we’ll retire into the night
~~~~~~~~~until tomorrows propitious sky
When Lonely Blue Moves Through You Tight Like Night Sky
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Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 5, 2003
OH..this is a grand write indeed..you have an innate talent to express overwhelming emotions using only a few words..yet in doing so you express the depth perfectly..ty
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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