March 7, 2004 ... written on a solitary road trip from the mid-south to Fargo: a thousand miles of change. Formerly posted as Northern Illinois, now revised, expanded.
Chasing a relentless highway up from the rolling south
I find the grace of shape and form
has dwindled to the bare necessities
in the outwash planes of Northern Illinois.
Dwellings dirt-gray, stately cubes sprouted
from the blank windswept ground
some the sightless white of a snow-blind sky,
or faded brick invisible
amidst a stand of pine and burnished cedar scrub.
Ahead only a patch-of-blue to rest a hopeful eye
and soon I think this is not so unlike home
where the rate of change is measured by glacial degrees.
Tires droning lull my senses
into a state of bleak expectancy
until suddenly sprouting
out of the great shadow of the northern forests
standing staunch and mighty
against a swarm of drumlins*:
a magnificent wind-farm just outside Paw Paw.
*Drumlins are long, smooth, canoe-shaped hills
usually found in swarms. :)
Ain't geography poetical.
Pretty fancy images, Aamie. Love you in peace. Regis
Reviewed by Joe McCarthy (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
I like your poem. I love sight-seeing. I just don't enjoy driving for long periods of time. I could let someone ese do the driving. An RV would be nice.
You caught in very imaginative, and delicate ways the pictures and ressounding emotions of a gray winter landscape. Drumlins are a bit magic.nFascinating write. Franz
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Reindeer
Anything is poetical if it moves you--and I was moving right along with you :)
nice work
john+