The following poem is a "prime," consisting of the following number of words per line: 1,2,3,5,7,11,13
TO TOUCH ETERNITY
Love Blinding light Room goes dark Heart electrifies, words go unheard Leave dull earth behind, soar to stars With trembling hand touch sweet eternity and join angel chorus singing Before reality grabs you back, making you wonder if love ever really happened.
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Reviews of "To Touch Eternity"
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on September 1, 2004
Yes, that is sometimes how it feels, especially when the love is intense. Good poem.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 31, 2004
excellent........(0:
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2004
"Before reality grabs you back, making you wonder if love ever really happened."
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
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Love can't be just a dream? :)
SueB
i like this genre and the motif ... well done!
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Sandie May Angel
Beautifully done Jo, good to see you;-)!
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