Unconditionally (poem) by Sheila Roy on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 11, 2011

"Grit and all, love that part of me, or, drop me to the bottom" love it! Perfectly said, Sheila! ~Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed on December 14, 2009

B r i l l i a n t

Reviewed on December 12, 2009

what a fabulous poetic rendition of, "Love me or leave me" -- and a metaphor of love it is -- bravo! -- Sheila, being creative in this art form is most difficult as I have discovered -- so many talented writers, so many gone before me -- so be proud to know I consider this to be unique -- peace and love to you my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 8, 2009

wow, aren't you clever!Fantastic bit of poetry, Sheila! Kudo's!;-)

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on December 8, 2009

Love me or leave me, interesting word choice to convey the message.

Axilea

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on December 8, 2009

What can I say Sheila?
AWESOME WRITE!
Love & Peace

William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on December 8, 2009

Grit and all, yes even the grit. Beautiful pen.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Take you any day, er your writing I mean. Pearl of a write. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Striking work Shiela, your images are stunning in this one and the message so strong and passionate as to make every reader wonder what triggered it. One of your very best here.
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Are you serious? God in heaven. Such a pearl of a write. I have to say this. I so would love to meet you face to face. Respectfully. I have not the right words to qualify your verses, Sheila. Love and my very best wishes from the depth of my soul,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

A pearl of a write!
We are multi-faceted creatures
that require, at times, categorical
acceptance. I'm hoping that all
is well with ya'll.
Blessings ...
r

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Sheila, Your ability to face vulnerability, is very inspiring. You have Moxey.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

oh so sweetly expressed
all the fishes of the sea
also the many clam beds
and there are too�just as many
deep sea divers
Beautiful Sheila�
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Nice work on this poem Sheila...

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Perfect. Love me for who I am, not what you want me to be. Excellent, Sheila.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

You show the vulnerable side of you--of all of us--and like you in the poem, we want to be loved for who we are--unconditionally. There is much said in this poem in just a few words. Well done, Shelia.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Much to ponder in this sad expose of what happens in life's quest for love and when sated seeks other conquests leaving disillusioned souls to weep.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Sheila,
I, too, love how you've written this, the impact and honesty of the metaphor are marvellous...

"...Exposed
And
Raw
Grit and all.."

John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on December 7, 2009

Sheila, I love how you have written this...it says so very much and I love the metaphor. This is one of my new favorites of yours...it goes into my library.