Seven Up Bubbles (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 19, 2005

cute, whimsical poem bursting with smiles ...

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on November 18, 2005

:) This is a smile, happy dancy, jivey poem- love it.

Reviewed on November 17, 2005

Ok now that I am craving a bottle of 7-Up and a dance let me say Marilyn this is a crisp bubbly melodic and refreshing write you have here! I enjoyed this one!

~Nikki~

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on November 16, 2005

yes! as refreshing as a cold glass of 7-Up, as someone said below... glad I stopped over here...

How are you Marilyn? I hope things are well with you and yours. ;)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 16, 2005

To me, these bubbles are worlds. A delightful offering, Marilyn and thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 14, 2005

Your write is as refreshing as the drink itself. Good to see you back at the den.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

What fun! :)

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

I haven't drunk a 7-UP in so long
forget what it taste like
Great to read you sweetie.......

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Delightful offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

Delightful write, Marilyn; sooo good to read you again! Where you been?? I have missed you!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

dancing, dancing on seven up bubbles
feeling light and bouncy-
giddy from the fizz

Sounds marvelous, Marilyn - Fizz On!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on November 9, 2005

wonderfully light poetry that cheers the heart and refreshes the mind, well done my friend.

Felix

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

giddy...feels more like champagne

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

Marilyn, how good to read you!;-) This is delightful whimsy, and just what i need to start make my night off right! Love the bounce!
Dancing right beside you;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

Poor Bubbles. Had a cat called Bubbles.
High jumps low jumps.

A poet and poem full of vigour.
Glad you found your way back to the den of fun fun fun..

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 8, 2005

Hello! Nothing beats the fun of dancing on bubbles. Gosh! Much better than walking on water?

Have fun anyway! What a delightful lively piece to read!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)