I hide my identity as I know the advantages of anonymity.
These poems are:
the currents of my thoughts
breezes of my feelings.
Just dressed with words
still not started the motion of action.
ambitious lights are not lit.
When it happens,
I will say proudly that
I pen these poems.
Happily I convey,
these are my messages.
Whenever I show any of my work to my friends, they encourage me a lot and question me that, why don't I send them to magazines I have written a small poem in Telugu as a reply to it:
This is a translation of it.
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Reviews of "Why I can't submit any poem?(Once)"
Reviewed by Srinivas Surya (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2003
Nice one. Are the feelings expressed in your poems a result of true experiences oir just your comprehension of Love and Life ?
Reviewed by raji
Reviewed on November 25, 2002
very good one
Reviewed by Vahini Epari (Reader)
Reviewed on November 14, 2002
Prashanti! i am envious of u...y am i not spontaneous like u...Very good one.
Reviewed by Amith
Reviewed on May 25, 2002
its good n i tried 2 put the above words into telugu n wanted feel but i think the original poem makes the diff
Reviewed by satish
Reviewed on May 24, 2002
hi df!
you have become master in penning love poems.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2002
Go for it..........
Reviewed by Ravi
Reviewed on May 20, 2002
Prashanthi garu....you are really born with the wealth of knowledge it gives me immense inspiration when I read your articles or poems.. well when I saw your reply to me today I was so happy. I am so lucky to have a friend like you..
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you have become master in penning love poems.