*If you ain't been there
den you won't know
how dem black flowers grow
naw you don't know
bout creeks hollaring
bout dat juice flow
baby if you ain't ben there
den you don't know~~~bout da shadow lands
The creek hollering woman spells play in glass bottles Colorfully hanging in the trees Singing whispers of dust roads and glory be’s wrapped up in dirty laundry Roads and roads left to go imprinted in the seams of hands And feet water up to knees My prayers captured in their caps like maps Face down and the sounds are captured in Oscars History kinda sorta repeats For she won’t be stopped Looking glass reflecting truth sung in Orange Moons to Mississippi Goddamn I sing in word form speaking in Dirt how the Blues didn’t die with you Billie, Bessie, Dinah No creek hollering still Zora surge her eyes watching God and Toni’s Bluest Eye see Caged Birds surely taking out of The Color Purple tie rags round head And wings round ankles Brooks cried like creek hollering Harriet, Sojourner, Davis locked horns tried to run the priestess This world specially this world of red white and blue is crazy, only hope we have is to blow-up enuf dust to reflect what where how when why we are a tortured soul true nature gainst survival Oh~~~but we be the prettiest sad I ever seen We be the prettiest down and out We be nothing but bananas and skin We be nothing but melodies We be nothing but stories in rainbows connecting oceans to roots to trees to sky to God In the shadow land they speak to me and if you listen gaisnt fear gainst society gainst the ones you love and claim to love you……you can hear the ocean move from drum to drum don’t know no other way spirits swirl under feet unshoed touching soil touching earth love didn’t drown with middle passages an Atlantis isn’t a dream love didn’t die with hands seeking little gurls gold spilling black gurl juice all over stained floors love didn’t die at the hand of men who promised to love No Oprah, Tina, Iyana we birth on candle sticks wick still lit corn liquor turn to needles and pipes that have the women running from creeks still hollering up praises we still raising Venus, Mary, Kesha and we still losing Evelyn, Anita almost Shakur Roads still to go imprinted in palms singing songs of learning love hard No real pedestal to stand on but those of our own don’t want others flowers waiting to grow to know ……..they won’t but stopped no we won’t be stopped
It's breathtaking, sister! What an odyssey into being and how it came about, how it resorted to rapture in order to retain its truth and proclaims itself with a scarred beauty supreme!
What a wwonderful picture you tried to paint with your Poem . I could see your wonderful characters in my mind's eyes. Thank you so much for sharing your work.
my goodness...Mitzi, you write with such power, such vivid life...often during lectures to young poets I tell them that first, they must find their voice...dear lady, you most certainly have found yours....This particular piece is excellent, not only from a poetic view, but from the view of pure and powerful prose. As has been suggested here, if you are not published, you should be. Methinks you could do well with either or both, poetry and prose.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
What an elaborately woven tapestry of human life, Mitzi Kay!
It seems to just 'beg' to be made into a novel.
Oh~~~but we be the prettiest sad I ever seen--There is so much depth to this write---so beautiful and sad and something i can't find words for--beautiful
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2008
I calls this, soul writing. Excellent Mitzi..
Stay safe
Ron
Yankee Doodle Daddy is a historical Appalachian Family Saga. The story follows a mother's reckoning as she struggles to survive and keep her four daughters alive.
Exploring the impact of literary icon Flannery O'Connor's noted legacy on the cultural realities of modern-day America, the world, and a certain author.
Yankee Doodle Daddy is a historical Appalachian Family Saga. The story follows a mother's reckoning as she struggles to survive and keep her four daughters alive.
It seems to just 'beg' to be made into a novel.
Ron
Outstanding picture "In The Shadow Land".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
I am certain of one thing: you are one of the most talented poets on this site or any other.
Please continue to amaze us with your words.
Stay safe
Ron
Neat Mitzi....
TRASK
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.