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If my words don't.........
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
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I know theres is so much going on in the world      today

      daddy can i get a dollar

     baby can you spare a dime?

i know there is so much heart ache in the world today

         got my ccw on file

       sons cryin out loud

lord thought my ancestors was gon spill-up salt water on land

    in honor of em'

 thought the trees were gone spread limbs and dance

     in honor of em'

and i want to write bout butterflies right now

   want to say sumthing bout feet in sand right now

but these niggas round me

want to hoop and hollar and drink gin in the dark

they want to say ain't no change coming

and laugh bout not voting and talk about the smell of pussy still lingering on his fingers

I cried when it happenned and prayed for his safety

got on my rug and touched my nose to the floor and fast and prayed and threw shells and orchids in the river

but now i want to write about humming birds discovering nectar

and the sounds of consuption

  but these niggas round me is crying bout black boys dying wit their shoes on

i miss good soft non-political poetry

i miss secret first-time loving nature poetry

  so if my words don't fit...........i'm sorry

     so so sorry


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 Reviews of "If my words don't........."
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on May 26, 2009
Very well written poem.An emotional written piece.take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Walter Jones
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
Smile breaks to my lips again, yur poetry is a folk song, so perfect, smiles burn the images hard...Walt

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on April 20, 2009
It's always a joy to read you. Your fluency in the syntax of emotion is most admirable. There's hardly anyone who speaks to my heart the way you do.

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 25, 2009
Too good for words. No, f a r too good~~!! You are a genius at
putting emotion on a page. . .and just the right images. . .in a way that makes it impossible to merely read what you write. It leaps from screen to mind and heart in a single bound. Corny way to put it, but I can't find a way to express how deeply I admire this. Your t a l e n t and p a s s i o n and s e n s i t i v i t y !!! With awe and respect and the highest regard, Phyllis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 16, 2009
from the depths of your pen rises this heartfelt expression, no apologies required

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on March 15, 2009
I felt the emotions you wrote this with Mitzi. It is hard to think of nice thngs when there is nothing but negativity around us. I rate this a 10 out of 10, and I too wish for writing about the rose that bloomed, or the clouds that bring the rain, and the clatter of my heels on the mall floor. There is way to much political bs in the world and in th writings of some. But don't let it get you down, because there are those who write about ature, and the family,ad buying a house, and having a lrge family, and love, heart, and soul. Thank you for sharing these wise words.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 14, 2009
Words digging into the veins of poetry's power, great piece.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
As always your writing is intense and real and comes from your heart and your soul. Never stop.

Fee

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Mitzi - Such a heartbreaking, truthful poem. Though your words are specific, they echo the universal human condition. The way you alternate
the longing for beauty with the down and dirty reality of this world is powerful. You express the individuality of the poet while at the same time portray the world. - David

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
Your writing is never sorry. It's rich and full of emotion.

Ron


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