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Behind The Door
by Shedding Light → (All Poetry by Shedding Light)
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There's so much wisdom to be obtained,
intangibles that can't be claimed. There's
a day ahead for all, there's this mystery
behind this wall.

There's this wall that has this door ... once
you exit, you are no more. But others tend
to disagree; they say only then will you be
free.

What's behind this spooky door ? An exit
we must all explore. You enter such a
mystery, your present life is history.

What's behind this spooky door ? Did you
win ~~~ well what's the score ? Did you
win or did you lose ? Hell or Heaven what
did you choose ?

 

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 Reviews of "Behind The Door"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
THERE IS USUALLY A FEAR OF THE UNKNOWN AND THIS IS PERFECTLY UNDERSTANDABLE. THE WORD SAYS THAT THE FEAR OF GOD IS THE 'BEGINNING' OF WISDOM...ONCE ONE GETS TO KNOW 'HIM'...THEY DON'T FEAR HIM...THEY REVERENCE 'HIM' BECAUSE THEY...WENT THROUGH THE DOOR. GOOD WRITE THAT WAS ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on July 29, 2008
This poem is TOPS in my book Harold!
Full of complexity but to me I feel it's simplicity!
It's like a spider web, to me -
Its' strung in all directions and we choose our path, (if we have a chance too, a prey does not)
but for me, to walk through doors, is growth waiting for my soul to keep growing! What holds back MOST is Trust, FEAR and insecurity within one self! When we go through, we suprise even our selves and see a better tomorrow, that was just waiting!!!
Isn't that a nice View!
This poem is a shining gem and you got me going again! See! How you inspire! that is a blessing! Thank you!
Walk through and wear a helmet with eyes and heart w i d e OPEN I say, START today!
YOu'll be glad you did1 :)
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive! And...I said it before and I will say it again - I love your honest open style of writing! Risks are worth taking!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Substance for thought, Harold. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on July 11, 2008
A thought provoking write Harold. Fear of that door should be laid to rest long before our bodies are.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Great poem Harold! You have a keen awarness of the present and have been able to entertwine it with an undienable part of life!......M

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on July 11, 2008
Very nice, I like it!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
A fine line we all walk and only God will judge whether we have done right or wrong, Inspirationally wonderful piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
Opening doors can be scary, but must be done, in order to grow and begin to live your life. If you are living your life without opening closed doors then you are living in a stagnant world of fear and insecurity. I always open doors and walk right through very boldly and openly, in order to fulfill your destiny. I choose life and it's mystery, over the hell of fear and misery.
Great poem producing much to think about.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
I've always felt that we carry our wisdom within us - an "attribute"/"quality" of Source - and that it is not so much to be found from without but allowed to rise from within when we release our resistance to it. And when we open ourselves up to uncertainty - accept it - and live not in fear of it, our resistance begins its dissolution and the door (of which you write) becomes far less daunting. Thank you for this wonderful offering; you've given me reason to stop and consider...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
Wonderful friend I feel we each receive what we give, as the Lord knows our very souls...

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
Wao! This is like a sci-fi movie, This is a great story line here Harold!!!! Interesting thoughts, I guess we shall all know some day....I definite;y am preparing myself for the door leading to heaven. Loved it!

Reviewed on July 10, 2008
Harold,

This is so profound, for we really never know what will come our way next. Great write

Mary

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 10, 2008
Sometimes life can be scary,but we never know what's behind a door if we don't use our keys to discover them for ourselves.When we open the door and enter through it,there's another world full of discovery that is waiting for us to explore.Very good poem

Edwin


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