...oh dear, that ditty 'lonely little petunia in an onion patch' has started running thru my mind. 'But seriously, folks. . .'
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. . .7. . .8. . .9. . .UP Before the Bell!
A single blade of grass, crushed and bleeding, shivers and pokes it head through muck. Single tap by a lone hailstone pummeled it to the mat for rain to pound. Blades on every side fell and sank or washed away. Widespread drownings and death by lightning: CNN.
Sun finally wins over clouds, starts to melt stones and dry-clean swamps. Blade hears a rip as it twists all the way free, but gasps a breath. Feeling comes back. Pain is a wild boar readying foot-long teeth. Somehow the blade pulls up and takes stock. Am I all right? goes the drill. How can I go on with so many lost? Why did the storm choose to maim them? Best troops died. Here I am, this sick shade of green. Puke with hair. Looked scrawny before it thundered. Crooked as a stomped petunia. Most who died were tall and strong. Good- looking, did their job. Packed on the chlorophyll. Tell me it makes sense. Sun’s warm, though. Warmer every day. Rain has learned to chill a little. Smells like the first dew of April. Honeysuckle, fresh ground. Who would have thought I’d fill out? Believe I am sprouting buds might just turn into robin’s-egg flowers. Oh, they will be small. They will be shy. Sun is going to dim as winter winds down-river. Leaves will land on dirt hard as rock. Each other. Most are bound to smother. Most are bound to crack beneath wheels and feet. Surrendering, every single blade will add to a boring brown mat. Mat will grow stout, then thin and disappear. But now it is summer. Grasses have a duty to provide cushions. Beautify and shelter those who must stay undercover. Better make food and distribute it fast. Clouds are dressing in the dark. Gird yourself for hail.
Nature is very much alive in this well written thought provoking poem. Such wonderful imagery! So much to appreciate in nature. You have provided an extraordinary perspective on nature.
Thanks for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
A fantastic microscopic eye's view of living life large, Phyllis. We would learn so much about how to survive and thrive if we just stopped to look either up or down from time to time... instead of inhabiting the mindsets of the vast and largely vacuuous space in between which we have filled with our own meaninglessness! I love this - well observed and documented in the most thought-provoking way. One of the leading literary poetry magazines here in the UK is looking for contributions on the theme of "moments of obscurity outside Warhol's fifteen minutes of fame: the unnoticed, the ignored; an interstice between two blades of grass in a municipal park; an arm cuaght in the background of a photograph; the extras in last night's film..." - this would suit well. It is highly prestigious to get into it, so I would love to see a contact of mine in there! :)) Deadline mid-July. www.magmapoetry.com. Best wishes! Kate xx
It's been raining and thundering lightnings here a while ago in Toronto, Canada. One lady in her 30's was struck by lightning in downtown Toronto. What a day!
This reads on so many levels, like peeling an onion or when those nasty little catepillars who fall from their cocoons and have turned into raving beauties that we are in awe of. Your poetry is like that, so friggin' deep, if you keep looking, digging and once in awhile we let our hands get dirty, we find a real pearl, something unique.
Oh if we all had the sense of purpose and determination of a single blade of grass, what a different life we might lead. I am always amazed when I see a blade of grass that has grown through concrete or through a rock. Perhaps the reason that the grass was able to do it was that nobody remembered to tell him he couldn't do it. Wonderful write, Pea with so many vivid images.
Take care,
Sherry
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Thanks for sharing,and continued success.
Barbara J. Henry
ON YOUR OUTSTANDING WRITING.
God Bless
Michelle!
thanks for sharing
William ....Peace
I like this, it is layered and deep, always something that intriques my in poetry! And love your intro!
It's been raining and thundering lightnings here a while ago in Toronto, Canada. One lady in her 30's was struck by lightning in downtown Toronto. What a day!
Wonderful write!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
:)Sandy
Love, Janet xoxoxo
Take care,
Sherry
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D