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Swallowing Rain
by dennis m stanfield → (All Poetry by dennis m stanfield)
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Doesn't really matter who is right and who is wrong.. there is still pain when a relationship doesn't work out

Tears sticking to my face like a stain

Head bowed under the umbrella in the rain

All I feel is pain

And I can’t move

I’ve lost my groove

And it didn’t take much of anything

I feel like on the inside I’m hemorrhaging

I have a hard time swallowing her suggestion

Almost like a feeling of indigestion

She was so ignorant

That now I’m feeling indignant

Now my face is indigo

With a bad case of vertigo

Awh, here we go

Another one bites the dust

She ate the inside of my pie and left the crust

I go def to everything outside my mind

It’s raining hard, like the earth committed a crime

Drop the umbrella and step into the rain

Maybe it’ll help me swallow my pain

Gulp

 


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 Reviews of "Swallowing Rain"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2009
Best words of wounded heart...in your voice, she ate the pie and left the crust!
Truly unique writing and love the way you describe pain of lost love!

Reviewed on June 23, 2008

Oh "Swallowing Rain" so sad Dennis, however you penned of tear jerker.

Take care,
~Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
Oh my,I also feel your pain....I certainly hope things get better for you real soon dear man...stay safe and well OK...Hugss

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on June 8, 2008
It’s raining hard, like the earth committed a crime

Drop the umbrella and step into the rain

Those are great lines-hope you're heart is on the mend soon.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 7, 2008
I feel your pain in this write,,May the sun shine and dry up all that rain,, time heals... Well Done.
Christine


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