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Waking
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Here is another free verse I wrote, keeping to the Aussie bush feel.

 

Waking.
 
 
Stirring in my swag,
aroused to morning sounds.
 
Water trickling,
lorikeets screech, chatter,
bush turkeys scratch, grunt,
early trill of cicadas.
 
smell.
 
Freshness of eucalypt gums,
wild flowers,
smokey embers.
 
Eyes opening.
 
Kaleidoscopes
of sunlight shards
pierce diminishing mist,
a small cloud of pale blue smoke
hovers above smouldering campfire,
water trickles over rocks,
lorikeets search for nectar,
turkeys eat breakfast grubs,
cicadas frozen to trunks,
kangaroos drink.
 
Hypnotised by nature,
Still I lie, not wanting to move,
 
How long will I stay?
 
How long?.
 
 
David J Delaney
21/05/2010      ©

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 Reviews of "Waking"
Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei
Reviewed on November 22, 2010
Really enjoyed this, David. Good on ya and thanks. I'll be back for more of your interpretations; I can almost smell the 'pale blue smoke' of blue gum wood burning as I think this all over.
Aloha nui loa, Kaliki

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 6, 2010
You have shared the ambiance of the place very effectively via your verses here, David. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on June 3, 2010
Really good, David

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
I love the mornings when all awakens for the new day. Lovely write.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 1, 2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Stuart McCallum
Reviewed on May 31, 2010
G'day Dave,

Your latest free verse is in a word: mesmerizing. As a reader you transported me to Australia's exquisite bush country where I could see, feel, hear and smell this wonderful vast land.

Outstanding composition.


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