WHEN I GROW UP....by: Linda Law (poem) by Linda Law on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 28, 2010

Hi Linda, Isn't it weird how we think when we are young. When I grew up I wanted to be a football player or a jet plane pilot.
This piece was so well crafted it was one of the best I have ever read. I am sorry if I caused you any trouble the last 3 days.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on June 16, 2010

I think we can all relate to this work. Very nicely done.
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Daniel Keith

Reviewed on April 4, 2010

Very nice Linda. I think we can all feel a little bit of wondering what we will be when we grow up. Love it. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 1, 2010

Truly one of the best poems I have ever read. You touch my soul with the beauty of your honesty and faith.

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 31, 2010

Your last few lines brought tears to my eyes... The poem reminded me of that old Doris Day song "Que Sera, Sera" but the ending took your poem to a total different level and on a totally different vein. Thanks for reminding me that we are all in His capable hands.

Cryssa
P.S. And the answer... I think I will have to quote that wonderful Susan Boyle song which says, "though I may not know the answer, I can finally say I am free...I am who I was meant to be..."

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

thought provoking read

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

This is awesome Linda and it is so good to see u posting again
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

Awesome. When I grow up I want to be a fireman. I just don't think I'm going to make it to be that so I guess I'll happily settle for being me. lol. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

This is wonderful, Linda, ...funny, self-effacing, intelligent, with a real hold and with great wisdom.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Steve Joos

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

I hope I'll be his as well, but I'm not sure at times. Good piece.

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

I guess I never really asked myself...Who will I be? Love your questioning words

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

Nice poem, Linda!!...but I'm always a little girl inside me. No matter what age I am, where I am in life, I still am a little girl inside me. I don't think I will ever be grown up. - Don't want to. So, I'm still dreaming those little girly's dreams.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

Very well put Linda, I enjoyed this one, I don't think I will ever grow up but that's okay...I don't mind being an eternal works in progress.
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Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

What a beautiful write up Linda....

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 27, 2010

How beautiful Linda, as we each grow up we can be who ever we choose to be. I want to be good, kind and caring to those who need my help. I look in the mirror and I have to be honest, I like who's looking back at me, maybe I have already grown up. You too are already beautiful Linda, take a good look.

Newfie Hugs, Rose