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This is not About You
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or the things we forgot
to discuss, or the things we discussed
until our lips faded into our faces
and our eyes
couldn’t take another look at whatever it was
that held us at attention.

Distractions, like how I am
sitting here, fingers positioned at the keyboard
and you,

you getting out of the shower.
It’s not that you’ve chosen the towel
that drapes your waist just enough
to make me type something crazy, something like:
There is a trail that leads from navel to pelvis.

Memo: That is not an opening line!

So I draw back
to Li Xiangting’s zither
serenade of strings
and focus on the screen:
cursor skittishly flashing as if it has lost
its patience with my preoccupation.
And I think to myself I am going to write
something worthy of literal importance
      of absorption,
of brilliance–

Dynamics: the study of objects in motion.

There is a bead of water dangling from your nipple
ring, its life dependent on the depth
of your breath and my ability
to concentrate–
it is about writing

and something I will later delete.

©  Maria Lupinacci 2005

 

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 Reviews of "This is not About You"
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
How many times have I read this (as I have most everything else you have ever written) but have not commented on? This time I had to or wanted to and still am left speechless. But you know you have always done me proud my little one. I just had to reflect.
Amor

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2005
Poet, I have found another treasure amongst many scattered neatly in your Den, that compels me to linger a little while longer. I am savoring the tremendous visuals you’re easily able to paint. It seems far too many times, there are not enough Poets who are willing to risk allowing themselves to fully harness and utilize the awesome potential of dynamic motions of thought, and transform “it” into “words,” which caresses a blank canvas from its conception into a full-blown sensual treat. I enjoy how you’re quite capable of achieving this feat. Thank you for sharing your work. Take care and be well.

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on July 30, 2005
For all my love of writing, on occasion, other passions must take priority...

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 28, 2005
Great sensual flow Maria! Erotic object in motion for sure! Great write!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
or the things we discussed
until our lips faded into our faces

..omg..I love this line!



Vesna*

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
whoa.....there is noting better than that kind of distraction! lol Maria... this in indeed.... well captured!

Reviewed by Jim Moore (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
You must have known, at least had a hint that this was a piece to be proud of. With its ease of flow and luring lines, not just the kind grounds the reader, but rather pulls them in headlong. It's the one thing we all try to achieve in writing but seldom ever do.

Well done, Maria!

Jim

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
This is about the third time I have flipped over to this and it just gets better and better, more and more tantalising with each and every read... by the time of my 8th visit I reckon I will be beating my head against my desk with frustration! Yes, yes, yes... just that LITTLE DAMN THING that drives you mad... say no more, I'm at fever pitch with this and could just about swallow it whole... as I seem to be prone to sayin at the moment! I think I like this one, Maria... and this IS the highly edited version of my review!! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Outstanding poem Maria, an 'object in motion' indeed and something worth saving rather than deleting.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
It's all in that first stanza, isn't it, Princess? A poem worthy of print.

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Excellent write! The words fill the space like water forms to any shape-in this case an easy, sensuous dreamy motion...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Very well written Maria!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Sensuality permeates this poem and emphasizes the meaning with each verse. Truly well done, Maria. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
It's unique and you have the ability
to carry the reader to different levels.
Brava Maria!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Maria, this poem is certainly an "object in motion" ... it is dynamic in its subtle sensual nature and its ability to totally absorb the reader ... you have certainly written something worthy of literal importance, absorption and really quite brilliant ...

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Superb erotic flow should be highlighted not deleted. Bravo.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
Maria,
There really is some great writes on this board today. This one on top of them all.
You've given us a trip through the mind, and tickled the places not many are even aware is there.
From beginners to seasoned veterans of this art of writing, one could not read this without needing and wanting to read it again.
Perfection at it's best.

Lisa

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
I loved this..well said and to think men actually believe only they think these thoughts;]

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
hahaha Marie, this cracked me up! I love the picture you painted and seeing the action was a real treat,the nipple ring was a hoot;-)Great stuff!

Eileen

Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Good and sensual.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Haha. A true poet's poem. It's never about them. ;-)


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