Flat. The scenery was flat. Paper houses, and cellophane children. Their voices screech, owls on the hunt. Sound wafting through an aluminum background I composed as a child.
Imagine a movie where the actors aren’t acting. They're standing, sitting, rationalizing what they are supposed to be doing -- only no one is doing a thing. Change the channel.
The boy next door wasn’t home, or he was except he forgot to watch through the window. His mother furious with him the night before threatened: If I find you on that sill one more time it will be the end of it! Not knowing what “the end of it” would be, he forgot to watch.
Sometimes the night comes early and the street lights aren’t ready–
there are laws to abide by, cosmic occurrences pre-commissioned to subtly (or not so subtly) remind us there is a reason for everything:
My brother is a thief by nature, banned from every store Jersey through Pennsylvania. The women he held company with have all been thieves as well.
This, of course, would mean nothing in concurrence with this poem except that it does:
Paper houses, children screeching, actors who aren’t acting, and a boy who always watches what the neighbors are doing instead of doing whatever it is he should be doing. His mother, unaware
of why she finally had enough with his dilly-dallying, came to apologize when she read in the paper that I had been robbed.
Surreal implosion of voyeurism and surveillance of poetic excellence, Maria! Who knew as a child, composing, what we would end up with as adults?? Would we be robbed, not only of material possessions, but also emotions? At least, we're not shy hens huddling at the corner of the pen. This neighbor boy just as well could have been me looking at a nude woman mannequin in the store windows, where as a young girl, I had such a fascination with the windowdressers playing with adult Barbies...the only thing I stole were peeks where the mute plastic actress wasn't acting...just my fantasy imagination...good to see you posting again, Maria...be well...Blessed Be.
What a total TREAT!! Great to have your voice back in chorus here, Maria... or rather, as a wonderful soloist because your distinctive flavour has such a rich and authoritative quality to it. Acute, astute and penetrating, as usual, no messing here. Lifetimes and lifestyles are captured with intensity and yet defined precision as befits the moment. As much as it often drives us insane, how often do we live to regret the "usual" not happening which might otherwise have prevented the untoward disaster? Life is sometimes full of dramatic irony, even when we paint it black, monotone or lifeless. Your usual high-calibre of thought and execution here, Maria. TY Kate xx
This is beautiful, Maria! I especially love this line: Sometimes the night comes early and the street lights aren’t ready– and the repetition of the first stanza. Remarkable work! It's so great to read your work again.
I love the word painting. And I feel the dimensions of the characters.
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 21, 2007
Our imagination tends to be wild at times...Sitting on this window sill meant something to him but stayed in trouble,,,There is a reason for everything...I agree...
Selected poems from previous & forthcoming collections together with Q&R apps on each page to enable audio rendition simultaneously with the written text
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
Amor
Well done.Keepup the great work...
pre-commissioned to subtly
(or not so subtly)
remind us there is a reason
for everything:"
It is true their are spiritual laws in effect past the laws of land and the ending was excellent to this poem...
peace,
josie
Sage
A beautiful flower for the literary Spring. "Back Draft" bears the aroma of symbolism, impressionism and dramatic rhythm.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Be safe,
Karen
when the unforeseen arrives it vanishes before we realize it's gone ...
Well My Family Robbed Me To But They're Bunch Robbing 2 Faced Liars...
Neat Cosmic Write On...
TRASK
Love Tinka
just an great vision.
Beautiful imagery!
Bill
Be well,
Kathy
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Welcome back!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Michael