Reading Scripture (poem) by Maria Lupinacci on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 15, 2010

Nothing left but to reread and comment on some I have missed reviewing. Your talent with imagery and phrasing is brilliant as always. Remember, you have not reached a pinnacle of writing and that portion shall always remain with and within you. So someday you will pick up your pen once more and shine beyond the scope of the sun.

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet

Reviewed on August 10, 2005

Maria, you've captured it, all of it, every exquisite shiver.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 14, 2005

I love this. Great write Maria!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on July 7, 2005

Well sizzle me inners. :-) Fantastic, Maria. This is just, well, fantastic. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci

Reviewed on July 6, 2005

Boy
I can't tell you much about be stung lips but I can tell you about a bee stung tongue. Well at least when i was a young boy and steped on a bee hive. As i was screaming a bee flew in my mouth and stung my tongue. You would think I would learned to keep my mouth shut
But Nooooo

I would write more but I ran out of ink

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 5, 2005

Maria,

Excellent penmanship.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 4, 2005

I like this, Maria! Scripture talks about the Tree of Life and the Tree of the KNOWLEDGE of good and evil... once we KNOW we are culpable and responsible for our own actions, to be sure. Yes, when our lips have been stung and are swollen with temptation, they part JUST enough to let the snake's schemes pass on in and take root, don't they just!!?? I am right there with this one! Forbidden fruit and fallen - the two DO kinda go together, I think! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 3, 2005

Sounds like surprise stealth of serpents wily ways...;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 3, 2005

Intimate and pure at the same time ,a dynamic mix Maria !
Peter

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on July 3, 2005

Gee that's hot: soul-deep and body-wise at the same time:-)

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 3, 2005

You read and write scripture so well Maria...superb write!

Paul;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Bad Thing Bout Reading Scripture 22 People read It You Get 22,000 Different Versions Of What Their Emotional Assumption Is,i.e. Worst Of Them All--Never Want To Be Around Born Again Christians White,Black,Blue,Green Esp. Mexicanos Explaining Jesus_

You Can Flush All 10 Commandments,i.e. THERE'S ONLY RIGHT Or WRONG...

Neat Poem!

TRASK

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Wow! exciting sensuality here, Maria. The 2nd and 4th verses are nerve sparklers.

So good to read you again
Marilyn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Sensually emotive and meaningful, Maria. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Stephanie Sawyer

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Oh, I get it, but in my opinion, this does not edify.
Stephanie Sawyer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Splendid Maria!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Not sure exactly what this has to do with scripture but I love the sensuality of the words flow. Very vivid.

Felix

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

This is so you!!!! I miss you tons and wish that you were here to give me a deep tissue massage. Do it on anyone and pretend that it's me, I'll feel it and shiver.

Happy 4th
Janny xoxoxo

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

Transcendant physicality. Sublime.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 2, 2005

An impressinist-symbolistical romantic composition.
"Reading Scripture" leads one to deep thoughts, although
the sensuality through its lines can stimulate the
libidinal imagination.

I enjoyed this poem, "Reading Scripture".

Healthy Life, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU.