I told her I didn't know what to say, which I found strange enough considering I possess three placements in Gemini and astrologically speaking, that would make for some interesting conversation, not to mention my moon is in Pisces depicting I am quite attuned if not overly sympathetic to others needs, though I do need to pay close attention, because fish being fish there tends to be a natural ebb and flow, which can be confusing, and now that we are on the subject, I should note my sun is in Cancer and isn’t that a kicker since the sun (according to most philosophies) is male-- and Cancers are so absolutely female. Thinking about that last statement let me clarify, as I wouldn’t want to offend, Cancers are known for their maternal instincts. So you see there is this duality running through me and seeing how my luck lies in Scorpio it all makes perfect sense.
I wish I could stop chuckling each time I read this...but all this for over a hello? is pure genious work.
Love, Amor
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
fabulous title, and the piece itself appeals to me on so many different levels. personally, i'm a cuspian aries sun, sagittarius moon, pisces rising - why have i not read you before?
This sounded a wee bit too familiar to me, Maria. No worries, just a characteristic of the brilliant mind...lol! You have an analytical brain, which processes so much information, theories, suppositions, etc. that it must have an outlet or explode. Thank God we are writers. Enjoyed this very much!!
I read this the other day and had to let it sink in a bit. It is a look inside the mind of an overthinker. Being a self-proclaimed overthinker, I find myself spinning out of context at the drop of a "hello" all the time. You have given voice to my pain. Now I just have to find a support group....
Peace,
B
Reviewed by Trainee Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
psychobiological thought of duality, existential struggle has been so well delivered in this astrology backdrop! Gemini and bipolar are the primary connecting symbols for me, which get into extended images! I liked the sharp humor down the middle, too! EXCELLENT WORK, though part of it may have escaped me, owing to my lack of knowledge in the field!
Delightful! Maria, you sound like a master astrologist. I got a kick out of reading this. All I can remember about my sign is I'm Capricorn, Libra assending with my moon in Libra ... and I've forgotten what all that means, but I do remember that I don't have any fire anywhere! I want fire! LOL Oh well, perhaps, in my next life! Thanks, I enjoyed this witty and well done read.
Hi Maria,
Yeah, I can hear this one pouring out all in one breath.
Actually I am Leo (sun)Saggitarius (rising) and Aries (moon) - and yes I did burn myself out at quite an early age. The fires are rekindled now though.
best
Ian
Hello? lol well I don't know where in the
world my sun is, so the question is where
is my moon. Sorry Maria I wish I did know
a little about that stuff, but I confess.
But I do know I'm an aquarian!
Great write as usual!
Smokin You Need To Do Sum Thin Else With Your Hands Or Chew Gum Or Ge A Hobby,i.e. I Smoked In Grade School(Kool) I Smoked In High School(Bad) I QUIT-Cannot Run Around Track On Your Face!
I am a total dodo over all the astrological stuff - which sounds fascinating - but the copious verbage sounds VERY familiar! :)) Sounds like my kinda "hello!" - unless I'm just waving, of course! Love the humour - knowing not what to say but saying it anyway! So good to read you again. Love your perspectives and insights, Maria. TY Kate xx
The coffee is good , but I would kick the ciggie habit !
Interesting and analytical composition Maria
"I should note my sun is in Cancer
and isn’t that a kicker
since the sun (according to most philosophies)
is male--"
Peter
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
Love, Amor
I read this the other day and had to let it sink in a bit. It is a look inside the mind of an overthinker. Being a self-proclaimed overthinker, I find myself spinning out of context at the drop of a "hello" all the time. You have given voice to my pain. Now I just have to find a support group....
Peace,
B
TP
Yeah, I can hear this one pouring out all in one breath.
Actually I am Leo (sun)Saggitarius (rising) and Aries (moon) - and yes I did burn myself out at quite an early age. The fires are rekindled now though.
best
Ian
luv the poem, Maria ... the astrological tides of our emotions moves through the planets and stars especially between coffee and cigarettes ;)
this is so profound, well written, I read it with my mouth open
world my sun is, so the question is where
is my moon. Sorry Maria I wish I did know
a little about that stuff, but I confess.
But I do know I'm an aquarian!
Great write as usual!
Off The Wall Write On!
TRASK
Interesting and analytical composition Maria
"I should note my sun is in Cancer
and isn’t that a kicker
since the sun (according to most philosophies)
is male--"
Peter
Felix
Reindeer
A revealing astroligical depicting of inter-cosmos of human
nature "Between Coffee and Cigarettes".
I enjoyed reading this symbolistical mind´s striking
masterpiece titled, "Between Coffee and Cigarettes".
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love,
Eileen