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Sounion At Sunset
by Richard Atwood → (All Poetry by Richard Atwood)
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From the ms.
How Deep The Pain Goes Quiet, After

 

 

 

                        SOUNION AT SUNSET

 
         Poetry...  to the sea.
         Its pages on the steeps
         below the cliffs...

                                           what little word
                                           can speak its noise
                                           of things as this?

         As this:

                        that lie in deeps
                        beneath the rocks
                        or space above the air

                        or temples old
                        whose beaten blocks
                        still stand upon the why.
 

          While all around, the wind...

          as though some horn to blow
          across the day,
                     they come to hear

                                                           the sun to slip
                                                           and drink its last

                                                                    ... the years.

 


Cape Sounion: southern-most point of the Attican mainland,
Greece; topped by the broken columns of the Temple of
Poseidon... where once Lord Byron hoped to carve his own
initials into an immortality beyond time and poetry.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Sounion At Sunset"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 14, 2008
This is a lesson for me, Richard. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Toby Russell (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2008
Your wrote to me that you prefer direct and simple poetry, but I detect a hint of the intellectual here. It takes a little effort to piece together the pieces of the puzzle. I come away with a sense of melancholy and regret, a wallowing almost in the frustration of not being able to convey what it is that needs conveying, of a frustration with the clumsiness of words, and underneath that some missed opportunity.
I like very much the way break up "While all around, the wind ... [snip] ... the years".
Teach me how to use space like that. The poem looks great on the page.
Peace
Toby

Reviewed on September 10, 2008
Great write! I don't know about the style, but I love the poem.

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 10, 2008
Through your words a world once alive and vibrant again comes to life, nice writing...

Be always safe,
Karen


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