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Hell
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I went down and visited Hell today, I'm surprised that I got away. Satan cracked his whip, He set me to work, Meanwhile evil spirits lurked. I climbed and climbed and reached for life, The farther the step, the deeper the knife, I slid back down, I tried a different path, All the while feeling Lucifer's wrath. I finally escaped with barely a breath, I was sure that hell would be my death. Satan let me loose this time, I went down and visited Hell today. I'm surprised that I got away.

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on November 12, 2003

I am very glad that you got away. Now perhaps you know what to do next time. Thank you for this, Kaci.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2003

well done. i think one of your best. very creative.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 10, 2003

scary, intense write; glad you are okay, kaci! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

hell may be a nice place to visit but i wouldn't want to live there...

expressed very creatively...

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

I tried a different path, ....I am glad you chose a different path and did not have to stay. This was an excellent write, and food for thought.
Allen

Reviewed by Sarah Mathews (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

hey kaci, nice job, i didn't quite get the meaning...but its a nice peice of work. .::Hugs::.

*SarahBeara*

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Very good work, and a great crafty piece too!
Am glad you are one that got away!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

I'm glad you got away...

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

I am glad he turned you loose this was very good. Kaci

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on November 9, 2003

Sounds like you had a hellava time. I'd stay away from there if I were you. Good poem.

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