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Goodbye
by A Serviceable Villain → (All Poetry by A Serviceable Villain)
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parting forever . . .


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The sun has set upon our make believe friendship
You never really took a chance to know me and now I have parted
The indications are strong that I will never return
For there is a whisper in the air of your promises unkept

The untruths heaved-up, hung loaded over any beliefs
Your unwritten words scattered and never reached me
I would never have the chance to see or read them
Yet I was willing to lay down my emotions - they are now silent

I can no longer read your thoughts, nor see your light
They have both been shattered by your silence, now too heavy to bear
Would never lift my soul - destiny has chosen a different course
No chance for love - the unknown will keep it secret

No memories of blissful moments to remember
No voice to listen to to take away my fears
No images of you to hold dear
No feelings to cherish - all my thoughts silenced in the wind

And now I must say goodbye to you
My thoughts of you now fragile
Love flits unseen - its mourning to eventually cease
Never forget how much I thought of you...

'2008'

 


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 Reviews of "Goodbye"
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
In a make believe friendship...you can make up an outcome!
A goodbye with a desire to remember...but not if the wind has silenced your thoughts!


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 17, 2008

Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Lance,

This is so heartbreaking. I can think of nothing worse than losing a love and/or friendship.

Mary

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on October 14, 2008
I hate sad and bad news goodbyes. I guess it's okay for inevitable
growth, letting go, and moving on.

Enjoyed reading this one.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Wow...without the power of knowing this sounds like dear Maggie is in trouble.

Excellent...painful twist inthe "tail" Lance-A-Lot!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
Gorgeous, Robert, like a roiling sea of sadness.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
You just got here: this better not be goodbye. Painfully penned requiem to lost love ... well done, Lance.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on October 13, 2008
So sad, but beautifully penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 13, 2008
The deep, profound expressions of having loved, been loved and then lost almost in the blink of an eye. This breaks the heart and saddens the soul, but very well written...

Be always safe,
Karen


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