Amazing (poem) by kg cummings on AuthorsDen

Amazing
by kg cummings → (All Poetry by kg cummings)
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ahhh... he's the love of my life

i think you’re amazing you leave my heart blazing you wonder why so i will tell you we were dancing you started romancing you kissed my head you touched my hair you walked away you came back i wonder why while we were talking you touched my leg balking you walked away you came back i wonder why i didn’t use you but i abused you you walked away you came back i wonder why for breakfast you arrived but i wasn’t waiting outside you walked away you came back i wonder why we rode Rolling Thunder i rubbed knots on your shoulder there was sunshine and blue sky it was over, you parked your bike i walked away you said to stay so i came back i wonder why at the Wall some magic happened we walked away we looked back we wonder why after that a rain cloud broke then you unbuttoned your coat you held me very close so i would not be cold every time you walked away you came back again so, i think you’re amazing you leave my heart blazing Copyright © 2006 kgcummings

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on April 26, 2009

This is a sweet poem.He is a very special guy for you to express these feelings and I can honestly say that you are one special woman as well.Always remember that.Take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 22, 2009

Lucky guy. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 20, 2009

You are blessed, KG - beautiful write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Breath taking....have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss

Reviewed by Ed J.

Very interesting poem. The walking away and coming back to me signafied the working out of problems in relationships. I seems very familiar.

Stay well and keep writing

Ed

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on April 19, 2009

kg,

Love is wonderful when you know someone will stay by your side. you have a very unique style, I really like it.

Mary

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Lovely!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D